/ Anime & Comics / Secrets Cultivator (ATG)
摘要
English is not my first language so bear with me. I wrote this when I was bored so....
https://discord.gg/Qd5YzEgR this is Dragon server. Talk to me here if you have any concerns about the fic or all other fics I have
標籤
-- 推薦票
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Sometimes I ask myself, "how can people write so wonderfully? I want to learn ze way, great senior." This is what I thought while reading this, I don't know what kind of System, Superpower or Magic ZAX seems to have, but the two fanfic I've read from him are written somehow so incredibly well. The personalities are accurate and fit, the characters interactions are funny and feel real somehow. The fight scenes were written pretty easy to understand, it didnt feel like other novels or ffs were the battles were hard to imagine. Please, the Lord and Savior, ZAX, continue whatever one of your fanfics, they both are masterpieces.
it's completely forced development with no f sense of a retard author. It's practically clear to anyone with normal mind that the development is not good but forcefull and mc wanna loser wanting to be added to plot with no f sense. He thinks he planned many things but they are not really plans, but retard wishful thinking.