/ Anime & Komik / Second Chance at Life [A Naruto Fic]
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Disclaimer(s): This is my first ever work. I am testing my skills in order to write further so criticism is well-appreciated. Just don't abuse and guise it as criticism.
English isn't my first language but I am confident about it so I don't think there should be any problems with the grammar or the quality of the chapter, issue might be the story.
A little bit of AU here and there. No major age changes or anything.
Also, I'll change the cover soon, I ain't able to find anything good atm.
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I'm not good a writing synopsis either so...here it goes...
Werdan was an elite assassin killed by the very own association he worked for. He just wanted to retire and live in peace but so was not the choice of the world.
To decide whether he gets to go to heaven or hell, Werdan was given another life to live. This time, in the world of Naruto.
But, the problem was...Werdan knew nothing about this new world. He never watched any anime.
Follow him on his journey to regain emotions. From being a ruthless assassin to being a loving brother and a perfect Asian son.
But...another problem was...He was an UZUMAKI.
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Just giving a 5 Star right off the bat because you're Marvel is amazing and funny. Hoping this one is good as well and I see you've chosen quite the look for the MC, nice choice
It's good but the development is a little too fast ....... ........ ................. ............ ....... ...... ...... ... ... .. .... ........... . . . .. .. . .. . .. ..... ... . .......
This is supposed to be good, but you better change the cover.... it's awful. It's an interesting idea. It's the second time I've seen someone reincarnate in a world he doesn't know about.(google translate) :)🙂