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Isekai Smartphone is about a boy named YuukiTenshin and was celebrating his 8th birthday but it was interrupted by a mage that came out of a portal which killed both of his parents to hunt him down.
When he was depressed, he found the gift of his father which was a smartphone from another world and swore to find out who that mage is.
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Fast-paced. Has interesting first chapter to get the readers curious. If the scenes will be more descriptive and the character more persuasive, this would be really good. Thank you, author!
This isekai is unique. I love the MC, I love the maid. It has a pretty tragic story. The times of releases are fast and I love it! Im curious about what you will do in the next upcoming chapters. Keep it up author!
I really love this kind of Isekai. When the MC's life escalated quickly and then he got alot of upgrades after that. I hope you will entertain me author. Keep up the good work.
Great start, really enjoyed reading. The world background is creative and imaginative. The flow of the story is great, keep up the great work author! BEST OF LUCK!!!
At start to an interesting story The story flow and description is great Keep up the good work.....looking forward for more updates BEST OF LUCK!
So far so good author, i think you should always double and keep discovering new words, so that you can increase your vocabulary. keep it up.
I must commend your story line, it's nice /, but apart from some wrong languages you used , your story is nice and very readable , and also understandable too
This is a review from a reader's perspective. I've watched and read quite a few isekai/system story. I've enjoyed them a lot. Hence, my expectation is unreasonably high. That being said, I didn't mean this novel is bad. To be honest, it has potential. However, what I felt and noticed reading this novel is that the author had these overflowing ideas which were challenging to put into words. The reason why I felt confused, and some parts put me off. For example, MC's routine and the scenes took part after his parents died. Fret not, I know by continuous writing, it would get better! I'm not a pro writer, but I know skills could be enhanced if you continue writing novels. Good luck on the author and this novel!
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Great start to an interesting story! 📚 The story flows and descriptions are excellent. MC is likeable and the world background is creative and imaginative. 😊 Keep up the great work author, looking forward to more updates!
Honestly, this is a great work for a writer being a newbie. The synopsis is extremely interesting, which itself attracts the readers. The descriptions, plots, and characters are nice. First chapter (the way tragedy was described) made me hooked to the novel. Pace in which the story developed makes it want to read more. Will definitely look forward for further chapters [img=recommend] Good luck to you Author!!
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Idk Why But When I started reading this novel I completely fell in love with it💕💕 The Novel Is Creative and The author Is Hard Working💫 Keep it up n never let ur readers down😇
I usually did not like isekai but i have to admit... the premise is intriguing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,[img=update]