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Scarred Glory:Field of Redemption

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Leon Aschemist was never supposed to rise. Shaped by a broken home and drawn into a life of crime from an early age, his future seemed carved in stone—until one glimmer of hope emerged: his older brother, Adélard Aschemist. Known to the world as a football prodigy and a beacon of excellence, Adélard became Leon’s guiding light, a symbol of everything good and powerful that football could offer.

But while Adélard ascended to glory, Leon was left in the shadows, struggling against his darker impulses and the brutal streets that threatened to swallow him whole. Torn between the path his brother blazed and the chains of his past, Leon’s journey is one of raw ambition and deep-seated rivalry, fueled by the desire not only to escape his past but to one day stand alongside Adélard—not just as his brother, but as his equal.

"Scarred Glory: Fields of Redemption" follows Leon’s tumultuous rise from being a notorious street brawler to becoming the world’s most celebrated football star. But as his fame grows, so do the ghosts of his past, threatening to unravel the life he’s fought so hard to rebuild. With the weight of his past bearing down on him and his uncle’s legacy casting a long shadow, Leon must confront not just his opponents on the field but the demons that seek to drag him back into the darkness.

Can Leon finally break free and carve out his own name in the annals of football history, or will the scars of his past eclipse the glory he seeks?

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Someh
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I think the way it’s written is quite promising. I’m still not entirely sure whether the focus will be more on Adélard or Leon, but I can tell it’s building up the atmosphere well. I’m excited to see more football action, though. Right now, the action sequences are taking a larger role than the football moments, so I’m looking forward to seeing that shift as the story progresses.

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