/ Anime & Comics / RWBY: RYZE
摘要
Dying for no reason MC is picked at random as someone to change the ending of Remnant, given 3 wishes at the start he is thrown into the world slowly picking a path for himself.
Edit:
I will be using the general idea of RWBY but will have my own ideas and story progression. I don't want to be a copy past of RWBY and be the side character or take away from others in the story
And please do give me constructive criticism as it will help a lot.
you know the drill not my art
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寫檢討
The story had a great start, and great build up to the rest of the story. Grammar isnt actually bad, and somewhat unnoticable, it does steadily get better chapter by chapter. The plot and story is going great, not much else to say here. The world buildup is written suprisingly well, most rwby fanfics have terrible world background and development, they can be shallow, unlanded and not make any sense (unrealistic), go against the plot and make said plot look ridiculously stupid, or just lack and neglect the world around them. This fanfic however doesn't do any of that from what I've read so far, and is being written and developed quit well, good job on that one author.
Nice Story Line i would Like to Read more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more😉
Bloody amazing start for a Rwby fanfic I hope that this one stays up and doesn’t get dropped. Yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup yes yup yeah I yes yup yup
I'm the editor of course 5 stars if I didn't it be an insult to me now read it I guess it's alright. bruh word limit is so fûcking annoying honestly.