/ Anime & Comics / RWBY : jaune's gacha
摘要
As Volume 8 ended and Jaune fell into the void, he woke up to the sight of a younger version of himself. But thanks to something called a 'Gacha' things had diverged heavily from what should have been. Can he guide his younger self to a world of less bloody evolution?
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I wanted to like this novel I really did but the Yuri element is too strong in this because if any of those girls like Jaune romantically and then go's for other girls romantically leaves a bad taste in my mouth like NTR dos... in fact It kinda seems that this author may have a fetish for a clueless MC that gets the interest of girls but instead of the girls being romantic with the MC she go's and picks up a girl instead... so far more romance has been between girls then the MC! I understand the author wants to add fluff and make the story more happy-go-lucky but the author seems to be focusing on the story of the girls rather than the story of the MC and at this point I almost forgot about the point of the story.
So far this fic is pretty good, the author doesn’t have a description for their book yet so I don’t want to say what happens. The chapters are beefy and the story has some cool elements. I would recommend giving the a read if you like rwby fanfics. Sending my support to the author
One of the best RWBY fics I've ever read especially on WebNovel and has one of the most unique premises 10/10