/ Anime & Comics / RWBY - The madness of Lappland
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Feelings towards a psychopath are similar to walking on a broken mirror.
Once you decide to step on it, you have to carefully place your steps to avoid falling on sharp shards at the same time don't let the broken mirror break under your weight.
Only being slow and gentle will not destroy the broken mirror, but its shards will injure your feet.
In time you will learn to walk on it and the moment you stop feeling pain then you will be able to see the beauty of this shattered world you are walking on where her blood mixes with yours and the reflections of the light show you, yourself in each broken shard of the mirror.
Only then you will understand that the moment you stepped on the broken mirror you lost your ability to escape and became part of this shattered world.
So will you choose to love a psychopath even if it hurts you?
Will you choose to risk shattering her mind even more?
Will you become the only visible person in the reflections of her mind ?
* the photo does not belong to me, if the original author would like the photo to be taken off, please write in the comment. My English is terrible, most of this work will be written in translators. Of course, all the original characters and stories in fan fiction belong to their original creators.*
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This is my first review so i should be careful... But I'll be honest with you. I love the story, the concept, the characterization (even the OC like Hazel), and the snippets of lore from Lappland. But, what i cannot enjoy is the grammar. While the grammar somewhat comprehensible, it ruins the delivery of characters worries and motives — scratch that, it ruins my immersion of every important characterization going on, such as Yang's PoV about Lappland's freedom (loved that part btw,). Despite that though, I'd still read it because of how interesting this is. Aside from writing issue, everything is lovely. Also, Blake and Lappland are basically the standard black & white, a perfect ship <3
I'm supporting a rwby fic, I personally love the idea behind it. Sadly I have a lot on my plate so it'll join my list of stuff I might read at some l point. Hopefully it doesn't drop in the near future, Good luck author as this review is my boon to you
Очень интересная и проработанная история, которая сосредоточена на персонаж и их взаимодействиях, на внутреннем мире персонажей, на жизни персонажей, а не на каноне и спасении мира. Но местами история слегка затянута. Некоторые моменты растянуты (в хорошем смысле, не вода). Просто ингода, при прочтении главы, ловишь себя на мысли: "глава вреде большая, текста много, но почти ничего не произошло, а глава уже закончилась". Такое присутствует не во всех главах (я бы сказал редко когда присутствует) , но когда это есть, становится очень заметно. За Лапландию - отдельный респект. Очень редко можно встретить фанфики с её участием в главной роли (я хороших не знаю). В конце хочу сказать, что данный фанфик мне очень понравился, особенно планомерное развитие сюжета, и в данном произведении персонажи кажутся живыми что ли. А ещё к плюсам можно отнести тот факт, что персонажи вызывают лично у меня эмоции (иногда положительные, иногда отрицательные). Что случается крайне редко при прочтении фанфиков. Просто интересно наблюдать за персонажами. Я наверное повторяюсь, но что поделать - это самое лучшее что есть в этой истории (после Лапландии)).
this is my favorite rwby fanfic the main character's personality is very crazy and it's a shame it takes so long for the chapters to come out
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1. writing quality is great, well to be honest if I can understand it, it's good to me (5 stars) 2. updates it's good roughly once a month still salty about those cliffhangers though (4 stars) 3. story development I love it I'm a sucker for crazy and dark stuff [!!!!!!SPOILER!!!!! AUTHOR HOW DARE YOU, WHY YOU GOT TO HIT ME IN THE FEELS... POOR LAPPLAND] …anyways (5 stars) 4. OC? don't know the personality of the real Lappland in ark nights heck I don't even know if it's her real name or not so I can't say it's a copy paste but I know it's not your original character design but I fine with that because this story is dope although I have a theory on what's good to happen in the future. two in fact I'll post it in the comments if you want to see, anyway enough ranting (4 stars) 5. as for world background well it's RWBY but darker (4 stars)
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Haven't finished it yet but like the story has well written characters and I am liking the anticipation I have for when she starts to... crack? (I think that's how you would say it) and how people would react to it and if she will get better but it unfortunately I'm more of a chill life reader and I can feel all the stress and bad feelings, got to much stress in my own life so won't be reading at least for now hoping the story continues and that you enjoy writing it
Dios mío autor si que odia a tu mc hasta yo no e parado de llorar por su historia al comienzo de la historia creí que era solo una loca pero ahora cada que escucho que sufre lloro por favor actualiza ya
The grammar is super shite, the author at the end of almost every chapter, says that they are the "Improved" version. But the grammar is just as trash as the original chapter, the only difference is there are more errors in the "Improved" chapters. If you value your braincells don't read this sober
I’ve been in the mood for a good RWBY fic for a while and it’s scratching that itch, thank you