/ Anime & Comics / Rom-Com Fusion
摘要
Noah Moore a boy who is unsure of his goal in life is suddenly given the motivation he needs to decide.
- A bunch of worlds all combined
-Big harem (please do not complain later on.)
-Wish fulfillment
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標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
........................................................................................,........................................ I really liked the story so keep going!
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While the world itself is interesting, yhe main problem is the MC. He received the system prior to arriving in the new world and when he was transferred, he already has the benefits so he is pretty steam rolling thtough anything. This could still have been interesting but you pretty much skipped his early life in the new world and just summarized everything. Its pretty boring as it would have been interesting if he received the system in the new world so he qas actually growing in character.
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