/ Eastern / Rise Of Void Dao
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Shen Yuan was a weak and frail, orphan boy leaving happily with his grandfather, a normal mortal life. One day his grandfather dies in a tragic incident, which also sets his path to become an immortal. Can he take revenge for his grandfather's death ? Can he learn the secrets of his origin that lie buried? Watch Shen Yuan as he breaks the shackles of fate and walks his path to becoming a god!
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That was a nice story, I like how he had a normal life but was forced to walk down a darker path, definitely continuing to read it. I like how Shen Yuan struggles with his emotions, like us.
It is actually an interesting story, I like how it's going, the characters are interesting as well specifically the Mc. Hoping for more chapters
Nice!!! It was really good and I quite enjoyed it. The plot was interesting, has a nice flow to it. Waiting for more, so hope you upload soon
Good job! Really enjoyed reading every bit of it. The write-up has a good flow and the plot is interesting. Waiting for more! Keep up the good work!!
Everything is very good Down to the last minute detail and I love it........ I just hope the contract you are talking about will be okay with this
Good story. Really has the potential to grow and be well known[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
This story has a lot of potential, hope mc aspires to gain power and immortality
Nice story, the pacing was good as well. Keep up the good work, it's really good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
nice,you did a great job. I haven't read all of the other chapters yet,but the first chapter so far was good
I really like the chapters you've created! The characters are well-developed and unique, which makes the story even more intriguing. Can't wait to see more soon, bro! Keep it up! 👍🏻😀
Amazing plot, love it ❤️ The characters and the power system are nice as well. Keep trying [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]