摘要
The entire realms have being conquered by the humans the other clans and being the demons, fairy, fox clans, dragons, phoenix, necromancer once high and mighty clans are now being slaved their pride have being crushed and are now nothing more than slaves
A demon clan boy comes from once the place which was called demon realm intended to take revenge of his clansmen and family. What shall be his fate would he be gone in the river of time just like how his parents and clansmen have turned to dust or he will make a legend of himself. Check it out yourself guys.
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A good novel laying here covered in solitude. You need to seen out at least a 50 chapters. So we can get your work and truly appreciate it. hope to hear from you soon. your readers
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whys their are so few***w chapters right now only 7 chapters seriously...??????????????????????????????????????????????? why comeone we need more of it more more and more
i have given the novel a 4.8 as i see their are only a 7 chapters till now and thats nothing compared to our carvings you need to get more of it out asap . ......................................................................................................................... .... ... ... ... .
Nice plot, i cant say about the rest as till far only 7 chapters have been released wold love to read more of the story this is quite different from the other stories out their.
need more of it. at the moment love them all . more more more more more.............................................................................................
Well first there is some trouble with the writing but i guess it could be covered up later but damm the updates i am seriously bored these days can you fasten up Damm primordial being you can live far more then mad snail i guess, but we might not. Not to mention there is a publishing button on which date you would want to update don't tell me you got the year wrong dude.
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As of now only one chapter has been released, but I will give my impression from reading it. The writing quality is pretty good and I hope that will stay true for future chapters. The character design is mundane as it does not describe any part of them besides their age. The world building starts off well describing the aftermath of the destruction of the demon tribe, but not much after that. The story drops you in at a weird point in the timeline after everything has already occurred and it is a bit awkward to read. The concept is interesting and I have enjoyed the the first chapter. I hope your updates will be consistent.
A Nice story waiting to be continuing but....Well please restart the story again we are w8ing for it..... Your updates need to be 1 star but oh well have a 2 one