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摘要
There are three realms in the multi verse; The Cosmic, the Mortal and the Nether realm.
Hal grew up in the mortal realm with no idea whatsoever of who his parents were.
His love for relics, adventure and the occasional danger would aid him in finding a genie's lamp.
Rubbing a genie's lamp should grant three wishes, but Hal is struck by lightening instead and eventually arrives in the Cosmic realm with a large book in his mind space titled; The Primordial Cosmic Grimiore, that apparently holds all knowledge for a perpetual reign.
And so Hal's journey begins in a little city called Salmon city, in the body of a 17 year old boy also named Hal but was sold into slavery by his own father.
Hal finds out who his mother (prior to reincarnation) whose bloodline now flows unmixed in his new body is....
Join Hal as he battles mortals, Dragons, phoenixes, Gods and many more together with his harem of Beauties for the complete subjugation of the three realms.
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So this is an original novel and I am giving it my all and I hope you give it a chance.
The First twenty chapters (more or less) were not quite good but that is because they were the first I ever wrote so please read till chapter 30 at least before deciding if it is not for you.
It really gets better quickly.
P.s The cover Is not mine
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Very good novel, especially for the protagonist in search of a harem that I sincerely appreciate a lot, in addition to the possible big harem. Some may complain about the r-18 short scenes, but haven't you read the novel "dual cultivation"? That novel has few r-18 scenes and they're all just as short, but I don't see anyone complaining about that. Anyway, author, please don't drop this novel, it has a lot of potential. For my part I can only say that I loved it and I hope you continue like this.
Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
(Read to chapter 54) 1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read. 2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!” 3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion. By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.
What a shame...... clearly it's a sketch of the novel profane prince of domination, however it's a little worse, mc poorly done, and the way you try to fragment the scenes is bad, after all it's not an anime, it doesn't flow .
Not every day I read a story with Genies 🧞♀️ !! Interesting story and its unique. Only thing thst needs improvement would be capitalization and punctuation errors need to be fixed in future updates. Krrp up the good work author!
Ways to survive the MC 1. Be Beautiful 2. Be hot 3. Be sexy 4. Have nice assets Only works for for females
Great book, underrated, good potential, awesome grammar, unique, great writing quality, and an awesome book so far with professional writing. What more to hope for.
Wow a very interesting novel the main character background Everything is awesome keep it up This is wonderful Please don't drop it the novel is very interesting wonderful thank you so much
heyo crazy cronie here, review on 24/01/2021 @chap100 review divided in: Short review Long review Ratings Conclusion short review: You came here for R-18? You are at the right place! You came here for A big harem? You are at the right place! long review: pros: 1) for those who came here for harem, yep this is for you.. this is really for you.. a very big harem novel 2) r-18 scenes short but great! Different set ups so yeah readers will enjoy it!! 3) some great comedy scenes, people might enjoy it... cons: 1) first 25 chapters mc is "inconsistent". The start is not great! 2) writing style becomes confusing (maybe only I am feeling this) 3) This really isn't romance. There are few scenes but not really romance RATINGS: writing: 8/10 update: 9/10 plot: 8/10 characters: 8/10 pacing: 8/10 dialogues: 8/10 entertainment: 9/10 OVERALL: 4.1/5 Conclusion: Read 25 chapters before thinking whether to continue this novel. World building I can't comment since it's only 100 chapters... A very enjoyable read for those who are searching for R-18 and a lil plot. To all the readers who enjoyed profane prince, this is a must for you!!!!
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Man of few words. Nice work//////////👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍////////////////////////////////////////
So this is my first novel and I want to be shameless but I will be serious with it and I hope you give it a chance 😄😄😃😃😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😀😀😀😀👌👌👌👌
I like the premise so far, and it’s obvious that the author has thought a lot about the world and characters and has planned it out really well. My only critique is that there are a lot of sentences without periods and mission capitalization. It’s still a pretty good story though :)
I already wrote a review however as it seems author really wants it, I have decided to write a more detailed one. So far the story is nice and shows a lot of promise as well as some little bits of what is to come. The author is clearly still an ******* and as such I wish to cut him some slack. Try to keep it up and write longer chapters.
started on this a few months ago and literally used all my fast passes and coins to catch up to 10 chapter privilege. don't regret it one bit. love the cultivation, harem, fights, and while sorta slow at the start the growth rate speeds up nicely later on. by far my fave cultivation, harem novel on WN
Boring parody of Profane Prince of Domination It took the author 200+ chapters to finish the story in the first city. (It was very boring) if you want a strong MC this book is not for you, you better re-read Profane Prince of Domination The number of power stones shows that this is a very sad story.
I tried to stick to the story and read more as it might become better, but i couldn’t . I don’t know why the trend today is to have unreasonable, merciless and Lustfull as a protagonist, withought any reason for his character to be like that. This story is a mediocre pornography to say the most. But certainly is not an artistic story that i enjoy.
good novel, at first I did not give much faith, since it had a few bad reviews, but the only thing I can say is that I do not regret giving it a try, if you want to compare this story with another as a guide I would say that the profane prince, but obviously different, obviously recommended and as you can see the story has for many chapters yet, we just have to hope that the author never leaves us like most :( **: I would like you to be able to better describe the characters since the spoken features are very Lazy and we don't have enough to imagine them, it would also be nice if you at least gave each girl a name, even if you only name her once because everything is like saying mmm very empty
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Hey readers, this is the Author but you probably already knew that from the 'Author' tag in front of my name. This review is to give you a quick and fairly important rundown of my novel and not just as an excuse to rate myself 5 stars *wink*, so here goes... The MC, Hal, is a little irrational at the beginning but please blame this on the fact that he is in a new environment and believes he is trying to get a feel of the 'place'... so to speak. Also in the beginning, (Spoiler alert!) he tends to unlock new abilities just in time to save his life from stupid situations he put himself in (This is only in the first twenty chapters. more or less). This is my fault and I did not realise that it was recurring until a reader brought it to my attention. - All this faults are only really in the first few chapters and if you can please stick with it. it does get better and you might actually like them (the early chapters) as well. They are quite interesting If you like or can overlook those minor details. I was still new at the time but I am way better now. so please, .give my novel a try and be a tad bit nice in your comments and reviews. XD. - *Phew* Now that I've got that off my chest, I invite you to read and Enjoy this novel of mine. - (Spoiler Alert) It's awesome.