/ Fantasy / Rift Dweller: The Forgotten Kingdom
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Set in a world distant from today, Xerith inhabits the strongest remaining humans from the great apocalypse that happened seven hundred years ago. Now split into 5 parts the world has regressed again and is on the brink of danger. Raphael, a teenage boy of unknown origin is adopted into a poor abusive family. He knows the current state of the world better than anyone else. This in turn forces him into a decision which changes his life forever...
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This review is going to be a short one as there isn’t much to work with. I‘ll be leaving a 5 star for support and I see the vision. Just don’t mess it up author.
if you're not reading this novel you are missing out, the action the suspense all hail the king of Authors
This is an engaging novel with excellent writing quality, strong story development, and well-rounded characters. It updates regularly, maintaining reader interest. While the world background could use more depth, it's a solid read. Highly recommend!!!!!! ---
The worldbuilding is amazing, power system is unique. The only thing I can criticise is stability of updates and some writing conistency and some small grammatical errors. Very enjoyable nonetheless. Thank you for the awesome read author!
ENGAGING PLOTS, CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IS GOOD, WORLD BUILDING IS GREAT THE APOCALYOTIC SETTING ADDS DEPTH TO STORY CERTAIN PARTS FEELS RUSHED AND SOME GRAMMER MISTAKES REST IS FANTASTIC LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE
Lets just say, this chapters this book in all aspect has a pretty interesting story to tell. It might be 1 of the top novel that i have read.
The story is quite interesting, and the character design and world-building are very good. The start was a bit sad when MC gets beaten by a random mob but overall It has potential so continue to develop it. Great work, Keep it up
I love the story so far and I would like to read more of the story, I did get lost in the story which is good but I got so lost I didn't get the character's personality which I want to see more of. It was sad that the character got beaten up for just by passing another character. I would like to tell the author to keep up the good work on the world-building.
Keep going and you'll make it The world building is unique and the character's dark past adds a mysterious element to the story.
Such a long time not finding something interesting like this, keep up the good work
well to be honest I am not really a fan of first person pov, but i still decided to read. The author has beautifully written every chapter without any major mistake. i could clearly feel what the mc was feeling and the situation that he was in. but the lack of information in the first chapter made things a little confusing. overall a beautifully written novel.
There’s something so special about this one that keeps me going. I’m not the kind of person that reads a lot , but since this came around I have been addicted to knowing more of the history . I love it!!
Wow I gotta say, this does pique my interest. It has nice setup but I need more. In all honesty it only has 6 chapters and not much could be said. But the author shows promise with this one.
It's so great i can't stop reading. the story line and all is good love your work keep it up (waiting for updates)
Author's shameless review here. Dear readers, I know that I am still lacking a lot as an author but I promise this book will be unique and interesting for you all. I've reworked it as I was very bad at writing in english at first. The first few chapters can be a bit confusing as some are in first person POV but after chapter 25 all of them are in third person with exceptions to POV chapters that are going to be needed in the story. Nonetheless I only strive to improve so feel free to criticise my work I will respond in kind to everything. If you want to ask questions go ahead I will explain without spoiling you! Thank you very much and have an enjoyable read!