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Honestly this is interesting, the story seems promising and I really love the way where the story is going. You could add some poetic touch and this sure will be better. Hope to see improvements and would read this for sure💓[img=recommend]
The concept is great. It's interesting and the plots are great. Good job author![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The book is quite enchanting even merely reading through the synopsis, I already develop the desire to go on and on. This is a great novel in progress. A must read for all!
This book is amazing. The novel picks the reader's interest right from the start. And the twist added from the first chapter is just too amazing. Well done author! Waiting for more chapters.
I love the names of your characters. I have to admit though, I am not really into spies and everything but this book really made me read. Its captivating and enticing. Great work.
I don't know what to say. It's a quite good. I love every novel. Nothing is bad as long someone work hard. Love your work.💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
very nice story you got, I must commend the plot majorly, it what would get most readers intrigued with the book, keep it up author, I wouldn't take long before you get contracted. ur story is nice😁
A story worth reading. The plot is intriguing but what really stood out to me was the style of the dialogue that keeps the readers engaged. I love the efficient use of dialogues! The writing style is neat and pretty well done. The author does not fall prey to superfluous or scant descriptions and we can conjure images of what's happening based on the narratives. A really good read.
Easy read which I love. Need some grammer help but story is interesting and fun. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Will follow to see what happens. Keep thing misterious and keep your readers wanting to know what will happen.✌🏻🤞🏻Good Luck
This story is different. In a good way, first you get to read the conversations between the protagonist and the other character as an introduction, the Author uses their writing style to get straight to the plot of the story making the whole read admirable.
The story is progressing nicely. I like where this booking is heading, and for as much as I have said it now, to multiple book may I add. This book is great and has a beautiful potential. Expect to see me around reading and updating my review! Keep up the good work!
To be honest this one of a kind. Its the first time i read novel that is about army/police so its really interesting . I Dont really like things with police and all but this is one is just as much interresting so i might just continue reading it🤧
I've just started reading this book, but I am instantly captivated. Great work author. I highly recommend this book and I look forward to reading what happens later on.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
wow the story keeps the readers hooked up!! and most importantly thank you for naming those characters that way.. i have already added this one to my library and i genuinelly recommend all readers to read this one!!
I read three chapters of the novel and I think this story has potential. The plot is interesting enough to read. However, there are always pros and cons in a novel. I'll just list those and hope that author would take note of it to improve the quality of the novel in future. Pros :- The idea of introducing the protagonist as an ordinary college student, before revealing her true self was an excellent choice. Also, the same goes for the antagonist or should I say, the male lead character. Overall, the start of the story was good. This is also the reason why I was able to read 3 chapters in one go because it attracted my attention towards the story, as a fellow reader. So, 10/10 for the start from me. Cons :- To be honest, the only thing the novel lack right now is writing quality. Meaning, the grammatical errors and vocabulary problems. Also, most problematic, the dialogues are written in a rush...like it is half assed work...I advice the author to put some thought into pouring emotions to each and every character so that they wouldn't look like only 'talking soulless doll'. I suggest you to read novels/watch kdramas related to such genre to give you the idea about how one speak or how one responds in such a situation. There are some other issues, but I think it would've been better if you find it yourself. That's all I can say. Hope you don't rush to update chapters and focus on the quality instead of the quantity...good luck! 👍
Very promising Novel with lots of interesting and engaging plots. The characters keep getting more relevant and relatable with each chapter. Looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work Author.
First chapter caught meee!!! I admit I've been dumb lol I was literally thinking the whole time 'why did she not do this' 'why did she not this' 'why did she not do that'. And bam bijj. I am slapped there's a great reason for it. And seriously! that one sentence hooked me. So yeah, excuse me everyone I still have a lot of chapters to read °^°
Nice synopsis. Fresh plot with upcoming action scenes. Totally of mah taste. Characters r so likeable as well. Even mafia tae is charming as well. Kuddos to the author.
I really like the background of the story and I wanted to read more! It's rare, because I never read a great book like this, good job! I like the way main character you describe.
A shameless 5 star review from the author🤣Please don't mind it. I will be updating Chapters daily from the previous ones to the new ones. I had spotted some mistakes and I will be looking forward to fix them as well. Hope you enjoy reading Ride Or Die With Me! Keep reading, supporting and voting!