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everyone salutes our goddess of wealth, commerce, soul and death 😍🤩🤩😍🤩🤩😍😍🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍😍😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍😍🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😏😍😏😏😍😍😏😍😏😏😍😏
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At chapter 18 I just saw something about molesting and being fine and just stopped reading ............................... .......... .............
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It's a translated book available on comrademao.com ..................... .. ...... ... ........................ ............................
I tried to keep it fair, but I have only read two chapters. The author seems like english is not their first language. The main character's name changes like 6 times and sometimes there is chinese names out of nowhere.