/ Fantasy / Return From The Abyss
摘要
Shin Luppiter awoke in a new world after experiencing his first reincarnation. Initially, he was cautious about this unfamiliar place, fearing it might mirror the harsh realities of his previous life. However, he soon realized that this new world was vastly different. Equipped with a powerful system and the wisdom gained from two lifetimes, he embarked on his journey once more. Join him as he strives to reach the peak of his potential, navigating the challenges and adventures that lie ahead.
[WEBNOVEL SPIRITY AWARDS 2024] Entry
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寫檢討
Despite not usually being into the System genre, I can't not admit that the prose is amazing. It's descriptive enough so that you can paint the image in your head, but still leaves enough vague to not only overload the reader, but also to let you use your imagination. I can't wait to see how the story continues.
The background of the world gripped me, all the things that poke my fantasy tastes were there. Overpoweredness, a villain group. One thing to note is that the pacing is a slow burn, if anything I would have loved to know the motivation of the MC, and why he aspires to be the strongest there is.