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摘要
I apologize in advance for possible mistakes, as English is my second language.
The main character is just an ordinary teenager who loves to watch anime and read manga.
One day, he decided to go out for food, but he did not expect that he would be hit by a truck in an attempt to save the black cat, because of which he died, but the cat was unusual...
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5評論
- 寫作品質
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- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
It is incredibly boring and the lack of emotions, desire, and creativity that was put into the wishes and the character are flat out depressing. If I had four wishes I'd ask for Perfect space/time manipulation, instant regeneration, rinne- sharingan that works on all physical and energy based abilities, and broken luck.
Well first of all it's really hard to understand your novel (more specifically the plot story) since it seems straight from Machine Translation without any proper Editing, nope I'm not gonna expect something with perfect grammar but atleast please make it easier for weebs & elementary schooler to comprehend your story and the point you author try to express. Second the character interaction seems bland to me considering the relationship always exist via the other person initiate conversation with the MC (considering his wish to let go some of his emotion). Third the story devolve into pointless typical chinese filler which main purpose most likely is to show the whole world just how awesome the MC which is kinda ironic considering just how introvert he's and his wish to be left alone to the point he decide to trade away some of his emotion (maybe because author try to recreate Shiba Tatsuya awesomeness) And lastly the fact that the goddess Athena decide to give mc something like Irresistible Charm only make it worse to the point even Wild Mira & Lisanna went blushing simply because mc act coldly toward them which completely contradict with Mc's wish for more privacy space instead of becoming the center of attention, maybe mc should try to follow Mystogan and wear Mask or something. The only good thing from this novel is mc didn't thinking with his dick, didn't actively try to enter romantic relationship & didn't try to unnecessarily show his power in front of other people.
I'm gonna be honest, this story bores me. First off the grammar sucks and the story doesn't flow well. Secondly you back track too much with no real good progression. Thirdly your thoughts are all over the place learn to organize some man it will help you. Set some goals and stick with them. Write your thoughts for yourself instead of just writing them as you go along.
2/10...would not recomend --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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