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the story starts good but once he kills danzo and bascily mind r*pes anko it jus becomes meh.. not gonna judge but if that your thing then go for it. personaly making anything that walks into a s*x sleve is not my thing. the MC has good control of his emotions and is clear headed but when it comes to his urges that control goes out the window.
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Really disappointed. I dont know about other but for me fanfic is a story that i wished happened in the anime/movies. And I want it to be good. Expecially in Naruto fanfic. I dont like when MC is evil. I grew up with naruto. It became a part of me and my life. So, For me naruto isn't just an anime. When i m sad i watch naruto. It is also a way of escape from the current life. So, I'd say Naruto is more than a fiction for me. When I watched Naruto I hated Danzo. I also wished i had sharingan. I wished all those power. I hated black jetsu and villians. In this fanfic when MC kills Danzo and his Root i was happy but seriously, raping tsunade? Changing memories?? Playing with them?? I never thought Naruto like that. As I said Naruto is more than anime so Its characters are also more than fictions. So, sorry bro. You aren't worth any time. Tsunade is more than a fictional character. No matter what a lady should never be subjected to any form of Abuse. Actually no one should be abused. You doing this in your story shows your culture, your society and the inability of your parents to bring you up to be a good man. Now dont give me ""This is Just a Fiction and Story"" But again sorry bro, Even though this is a fiction this shows your dirty fantasies of raping and playing with others life and feelings. It is like if there was no law in our world you would od the same to women and girls. So, I better be away from you. I dont hate 18+ chapters when both parties are consensual but Say no to Rape.
Apart from how mc gets anko, honesty I liked this story. Because of his OP system he gets really strong, quickly. Which is refreshing in its own way. As mc doesn't need to grind chapter after chapter, which at some point, gets boring. If u can tolerate author not so successful attempt at smut, I'll recommend reading it atleast. I mean author can improve as story goes, so give it a try atleast.
trash, one of the shittiest fic ever, WARNING, NTR !!!, MC IS A CUPID CU CK AND LOVE B I * CH AND W * ORE ALIKE. HE WILL MAKE ALL PEOPLE STRONGER
He basicsy gets EMS for free from the system, kills danzo in two sentences, and spends most of his time eating ramen. The whole story is about an unmotivated overpowered character written by an unmotivated author, with no actual plot.
after i finished reading this story, I feel disgusted it left a bad taste in my mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As one person said, after reading this story fluently, I felt sorry for my time spent and also disgusted. MCs are just a kid who misuses his power and doesn't know what to do. Boring, illogical and stupid story. And I was very lenient in my review.
By chapter 8 he kills danzo...with amaterasu ....after fee more chaps he 8s like hey anko i wanna **** you...anko is oike you strong lets ****....like some caveman .....nope this just isnt worth reading