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I just wanna day it says 32 chapters a week when there is only 27 chapters 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I absolutely love the story and the author. It provides such a new and refreshing take on Naruto but doesn’t take away the charm that Naruto already has. I would recommend this book to anyone who wants a Naruto fan-fiction that sticks to the original but provides enough originality that doesn’t make it seem overly reliant on the original story. Overall great fan-fic and hope it doesn’t get dropped🙏
So it was a reincarnation story anyway? I really had my hopes up. Include a reincarnation tag so people like me don't get this disappointed. You could have EASILY just made this an alternate Naruto timeline where this new Yamanaka existed and became his friend but no you had to make it a reincarnation story and completely ruin it. As you might be able to tell. I'm not mad, I'm just disappointed.
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I would say that, your fanfic is almost a revision of naruto. Mostly logical and reasonable, Just enough change in the right areas, and even if some parts are outrageous, they are still in the realm of possibility within the parameters of naruto universe. One thing I like most about your fanfic is the length of the chapters, the way you layout each arc, and the flow of the story along with the TPO of each event that happens. I hope that he will rediscover his clans lost arts though. Too much emphisis is placed on the storm lineage for his power. Place more events for the mind jutsus and such. I love this fanfic up there with Kurama and Me https://***.webnovel.com/book/14569907606873805/Naruto-and-Kurama
Pls pls read the comment I know pretty late but something better than nothing. The world building and character design were awesome got me hooked from the 1st chapter and it always got better. The story was well written it doesn't go too fast not to slow.i still don't understand why u stopped posting more chapter after 51.pls continue updating it. Love from india 🇮🇳
Considering this author likes to steal others works, let me break this down for everyone. I, AelloNikaia23, wrote this story. The first chapter was published on FFN on Jan 1st, 2020. Considering that I just happened to stumble across this story thanks to a random thread on Reddit, I have indeed reported the author for copyright and plagiarism infractions. I'm hoping that the support team for this site takes these matters seriously, because I am absolutely livid. My permission was neither asked nor given for someone to straight up STEAL my work. Like... Bro. I wouldn't be half as livid as I am had you even slipped in a mention of me. But there's notta. Nothing. Zilch. Like... Come on, bro. Anyone who stumbles across this story, just know that this story is DEAD. If you're hoping for this "author" to post a complete story, you'll be sorely disappointed. And if he DOES try and continue to write the ending, I can guarantee you would notice immediately the difference in quality and style. However! If you do enjoy this story, just know that at some point in the future I plan to completely rewrite and *finish* this story. It was my first ever fanfic and holds a special place in my heart. However, I'm currently writing a Percy Jackson/Naruto crossover that I intend to finish before rewriting Kenta's story. Follow me on FFN (AelloNikaia23) if you want to get an alert in the future when I start this story back up. The story will be called "Masters of the Mind." (Or if you wanna read a pretty decent (in my humble bragging opinion) PJOxNaruto story) Thank you for coming to my TEDTalk.