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-- 推薦票
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Well what to say. Bad grammar and stupid goody 2 shoes mc. Overall world building is not really here. Character development isnt really here as of chapter 30. Also the mc shows a lot of signs of being omegamale and developing into a puss.... or a stupid slave weeeelll... :D Others might not agree but well thats my honest opinion.
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the story is not so good along with the author's grammar the MC is so stupid to the point of being OP as the same as his system creation magic he can create literally anything but choose the most stupid powers literally this story can be done in 1 chapter by making the MC op having power to mind controlled and etc. basically the author just making it a idiotic chapter for lols
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Fantasy world, yay! Broken magic cheat on the level of wish granting... ok. Would have been better if he trained before reaching that level, because "infinite mana" isn't equal to "knowledge" and "control" Dull pussy protagonist. The system is more interesting than the f***ing MC!!
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Seriously, if you can’t even be bothered to write a synopsis why would anyone bother to read it? It just shows the authors is lazy and doesn’t care enough about their story to write anything good.
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Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
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Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
OP MC without reason = Check Stupid Retarded MC = Check Typical Hero MC = Check Stats, rank, ability that make no sense = Check MC that get throw everywhere = Check Typical cliche MC = Check Wow, typical stupid MC that make thing that makes no sense at all.. The ability of Creation is SSS+ but he is able to create things that are X+?? (X+ is a rank higher than SSS+). It makes no sense. More over the ability of creation require knowledge, but he is able to create magics and ability how he wants?? Where did he acquire the knowledge for it? How does he know how to use magic, how to circulate magic to create that particular ability, how to use the ability to impact the world?