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"What? I have to engage in carnal and pleasurable activities to sustain my life?" William, a 20-year-old virgin, was dumbfounded by the sudden onslaught of messages in his mind. In just one day, his entire life had been turned upside down.
On the day he was supposed to go to work, William was resting on a bus, sound asleep, when a truck crashed into it, killing him instantly.
When he woke up he soon learned that he had been reincarnated as Lucien Devereux, a playboy aristocrat who likes to mess around in a world with a medieval European setting. He also discovered that he had been revived because the Goddess of Sensual Delight, Lascivia, took pity on him for dying while still a virgin. As a result, he was given a second chance at life, but under one condition: he must constantly engage in carnal and pleasurable activities. Otherwise, his life limit would cease to exist, and he would die for eternity.
With the help of Auman, a genie sent by Goddess Lascivia, Lucien was determined to become successful in his new life. Success in both relationships and seeking power!
[Author Note: Please read the disclaimer.]
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Coming here for the cliche, rather interesting premise. The writing quality is decent overall, but could benefit from some trimming of unnecessary or overly long paragraphs to allow readers to draw their own inferences. There were a few errors, such as misplaced pronouns, but they were relatively minor and likely to be corrected by the author upon my review. (Mind you, I'm not a native English speaker myself. So, I might be mistaken about the grammar, and you should just check it out yourself.) The story pacing may be slow, but not to the point of being boring. The author has gradually revealed information about the world throughout the 20 chapters so far, even though only three hours have passed in the novel's world. Although it's slower than some other novels, it's still better than those that fail to reveal any background information after several chapters. So far, the author has introduced us to two distinct entities for the system in the novel. One of them was a typical system, which functioned passively without the ability to communicate. The other was a genie, acting as a customer service representative for the system and assisting players when they experienced difficulties. The update rate was decent, with at least two chapters being released per day. While I don't have any issues with this aspect, I believe it would be even better if the author could release more chapters daily. P.S (I reserve the right to change my review after reading more chapters, so I encourage the author to maintain consistency in their work.)
It is alright at best, there are many inconsistency with story line, and pretty predictable with lame decisions, and story can't grip my attention for long, it just feels generic that is done thousands of times, foundation is pretty bad, you need your readers to understand fundamentals of the struck of the world and his family and his personality for me to be drawn towards the mc, and power structure and ranks, there is no where to be seen, and the path thingy is pretty unique but it also have indecisiveness to it.
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A regrettable read overall, starts off promising but the many grammatical errors makes it hard to fully get invested and a lack of a strong story really drag the book down. However, it’s still readable so. I will give it 3. Update are terrible author makes no effort to update readers and for this reason a 0/5. Like I said if there is a good story here it’s hard to find. 2/5 Character designs are actually about average for WN so 3/5 World background is about the same with being the average WN read 3/5. Overall don’t waste your time with this book. The Author doesn’t care to update the readers so you shouldn’t care to hand over your money.
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This novel had a great start Introducing the MC and the world setting. Right now around 70 chapters I can say that the story has been very good paced. My only dissatisfaction will be if this story gets discontinued.
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I read 4 chapters and I'm quitting. figured out why I quit and gave it 1 star................................................................................
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