/ Anime & Comics / Reincarnated to Another World because ROB asked me.
摘要
Apparently I died then a ROB, robbed my soul from afterlife to ask me do something for him.
Then he let me choose 3 ability that i can use to help my journey.
I pick some the most OP abilities i have ever know.
HAHAHAHA.
I will be reincarnated to anime and eroge world.. which is most otaku dream!!
With my incoming overpowered ability it should be easy right?
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Mc wake up and see his new identity.
He realize he is still ducked.
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"" Talk
[] System, Skill
Thought.
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This is my first fic so dont really expect anything, really.
I dont own anything except probably the OC MC, Even the cover i take somewhere from internet.
English is not my main language, not even second, but my third language so expect some grammar or typo mistake.
I dont have editor either.
The update perhaps heavily depend on my mood.
Oh yeah, content warning btw. Also look at tag.
And last, my writing style might be weird. A lot time I will use MC POV.
I guess I'm playing too much eroge.
If you are looking R-18 content, It would be happen on much later.. I want to write proper progress between mc and her girls instead making them immediately go for mc without reason.
Anyway Just enjoy. Trying to write fanfic because covid anyway, filling time and self satisfaction. Stay safe.
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yeah no longer post this on here. It just killing my motivation to improve lol. It is also not like I have disrespect any character I've use either.
Man this place.
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okay, mc is stupid, I mean really stupid. he is cringy. in meeting with Azazel he told him everything, he could have told him that I have secrets but Nah, it could be a huge turn-off for many, he doesn't have a brain same as an author I guess. ah, he is irritating also. The same goes for the system
He told Azazel that he's a reincarnated person and his whole world is anime(He even told him about R.O.B and the mission). His sister knows this too. Mc is stupid, naive and cringy. He's so pathetic that this isn't even funny anymore. His sister is manipulating him and lying to him every time. Compared to his cheat his sister is growing way faster and working behind the scenes. The system is helping him develop proper character but is too slow and a lot of things happening behind his back. Nearly every character is doing something behind his back and he has no idea. Honestly, the real mc seems like his sister to me. Also, the system is very irritating. Me when I'm reading this:
Mc met Azazel and told him about R.O.B and the mission and told his sister that he is from another world and that they are characters from novels and anime. ruined it for me.
This could've been interesting. This story has an entertaining psychological/horror element to it - plenty of dark themes. And then disaster strikes...MC reveals all his deepest, darkest secrets to an utter stranger. Get this...who he trusts first meeting simply because he thinks that the Fallen Agent Azazel is trustworthy from what he knows from the DxD anime. I've seen protagonists make poor choices before, but this is on a whole new level. The author must either be naive, or clearly just an idiot.
If this was intended to be a comedy... sorry it's really pathetic it ain't even funny. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Uhh this is culture on here right? to rate your own novel 5*? .... Huh I felt strangely guilty about this. Well.. this is my fic. Literally write it for hobby and no one paid me for this. I have plot, or atleast plan to have good plot. Main selling probably comedy. Mc reincarnated to mixed anime world then later go other anime world because why not. See that akikan siscon novel? yah I take example from it. Except 10x cringe and 10x more siscon
In what place it is comedy ? It’s absolutely not funny ———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-———————————————————————————————-
MC IS STUPID 🙃.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
really hate the mc for telling everything that was just straight stupid no excuses even if the guy is chill and one of my fac characters that not allowed you gotta follow the rules man
mc is basically slave of his sister and rob. he's also has split personality along with his sister. too dark sometimes and too sweet sometimes. need to have a balance but too much dervirsity is bad.
utter trash beta naive mc with trash powers why does the author try to write such thing such novel is nothing but hot garbage and while author super nerfs mc by making him dumb he makes his sister mc like character with one of the most op power in anime
trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
you just ruined the potential of this story sooo hard. ...........................................................................
At first the story doesn't feel too interesting, many typo and grammar error, but over time the story quality kept getting better. For the newcomer I hope you give this one a shot, and try to stick it till chapter 9 or something 😄
such a stupid mc..............................,................... hah~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Didn´t rly expect it to be this good. But well i would recomend it to anyone who likes a bit of comedy with slice off life and a huge a*s siscon as an MC :D
Well, this is a good story that have much potential and you need to read it. I got hooked just by reading a few chapters of this story. So I really recommend this story for you.
The quality isn't that bad but the story is not good. Really sorry to say this but the plot and characters aren't up to Paar. I'm no fan of weak and stupid MC, but this here is borderline insane and just doesn't make sense with the MC being so old. In general Character Design is one major weakness of the story from the get go, it's so Inconsistent that it's basically non existent. Also the Tags aren't really accurate the story is much more darkish that happy go lucky and even the forced humor is pretty bad. I don't know where the Author wanted to go with his idea but it reads like he want sure himself.
in the sixth chapter he will tell Azazel that he is reborn from another world. At this point I gave it up, I hope I saved someone some time. . .. .. .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .