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章節 69: Note

I've edited the chapter titled 'A cockroach', and added a little sentence that Alaukik says after he kills Jamshed.

In short, if you don't want to bother going back and reading it, he basically says

"That was so anticlimactic"

And I added after that,

"Is it because I have far more important things to worry about than a poor soul like him?"

Now, I didn't realise it before, but some people who were waiting for revenge might've found this scene to be disappointing. I'm sorry for not reaching your expectations, but in all honesty Jamshed and the RC were never the villains in this story. They were simply roadblocks Alaukik had to get over. We're slowly encroaching upon the real villain's territory, and this villain is the one with whom you can expect the super climactic fight and op destruction with. This is kinda spoiler territory, but this villain has quite a close connection with Alaukik, so the reveal will be one to kill for.

Welp, once again, I'm sorry if I disappointed you guys. I'm also learning through this novel, and it is my first time writing a novel. A lot of it was unplanned and written when inspiration struck, but halfway through vol 1 I had started to actually plan ahead. So, I'm sorry if I disappointed or failed you guys. I'm open to suggestions, constructive ones mind you, and am willing to edit the story if the suggestion seems good.

Any plot holes you guys find, any strings I left untied, or anything I could improve about. I'm open to comments about any of them.

And thank you Ayano_Chibi for the review!!! It's really motivating to see someone appreciate something I've poured effort into!

Thank you guys for reading the novel, and have a great day ahead!!


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