摘要
a young man reincarnated as Milim Nava's Brother what did you think it was
General Audiences
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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I'm really liking this overall, the grammar could use work though, if you want I can be an editor for you. Chapters could also be longer.
you should read it and see if you like it