/ Anime & Comics / reincarnated as alucard in black clover
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long story short,guy dies by the error of twin gods,he gets wishes and reincarnates into black clover as the crimson fucker aka alucard…and makes plenty of heroines fall for him.
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the overall idea is great but writing bruh you all over the place like you need a beta reader or some i might return to read this if the writing improved looking forward to your improvement cheers
dipshit...utterly disappointed. The idea was good but was not implemented even a little bit. Got boring and useless & baseless plot development.
Not gonna lie, this has an excellent idea. But sadly a poor and pitiful execution... I'm not gonna comment on grammar, as that can be improved in the future. But just reading the conversation between two characters, it feels straight up NPC like. I really hoped this would get better in the later chapters, but sadly 😔😔.... Sigh, Listen don't want to be too mean, just at least proof read a chapter before you post it..
it's really rare to find any good Alucard fanfics out there was one but the author stops updating it it's updated once in awhile but anyways I hope to see more chapters.
I don't see to many black cover stories. The writing is great along with an interesting character. I can't wait to read more. Please don't drop.
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awesome story so far, great start and I hope you keep up the awesome work