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---- -----, your resident shut-in! Lazy, unambitious, apathetic, all words that describe this terrible excuse for a person. While he's the type of person to only leave his cramped apartment only once a year or so, he finally leaves for a bit to get some food, however, life had different plans for him.
Before he could even react, a car comes crashing towards him while crossing the street. Hardly able to even think properly, he hears a strange, almost robotic voice speak to him.
Without another second to even contemplate what happened, he appears in a strange place, his sight, hearing, and sense of smell robbed of him.
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Hey! I hope you do be wary if you decide to read this! The first fifteen to twenty chapters are incredibly old, like two years old! After that, it gets a bit better, but do make sure you know what you're getting into.
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i love this story. characters are well built, if a bit corny. the world's detailed enough to be descriptive yet vague enough to keep an air of mystery.
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i forgot about this becuase it had a little bit of chapters and your still working on it ill read..............................................................................................................................................................................
Any romance here? Tensura Slime left much to be desired in that department and when he’s surrounded by women it kinda makes you wonder if he even likes them or is he just a typical Japanese beta mc 😔. I just wanted to know before I started reading.
want more slime plz. this story is great, hope the other story gets updated too. 123457 124 t 7 14568 13578 e467i 33579 34568 24 56 I. seriously plz update other slime story too.
I'm sorry by why tf is the guy si childish, like I understand that he's a neet or an otaku or whatever but bruh, why so childish
I chnaged my mind, OH MY GOD WHY IS IT SO HARD TO TYPE ON THE APP??!! Anyways, Its better now than thee beggining, i hope this turns inro a tentcale yaoi smut tho plz
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Shameless author here, how's it going? So i'm going to change a lot in this rewrite and I'll also do some polls to see what you guys want. See you later.