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Reincarnate as Ultron in a Cultivation World the title already told you the Synopsis you boosted apes lol...ok since on of the review say the Synopsis is weir...so here the real one
Wait wut...I died?wait wut now I’m Ultron from the Marvel universe?wait wut!im in a Cultivation World?what more fuck up is there?oh sht a system?wait a second i can buy the infinty stones from the system store for 1billion points each!?wtf...wait I buy Aurelion Sol?wait ok nvm it cost 500billion point and it take 1million years to reach adult hood...fuck that nobody got time for that sht!Oh hohoho what this?a potato of time and space?dafaq is that where that come from?wait it can increase your power by 999x and grant immortality isn’t this fuck up for a potato!?lol wait I forgot it the potato of ‘time’ and ‘space’ lol...this world and system is fuck up...
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Hi so aside from your horrible grammar, this seems like a pretty good original novel you've come up with. Why don't you try to get a editor to help you with the grammar? If you don't know where to get one then just try using Microsoft word or something to fix it for you.
Hoop Author here date 5/1/18 and I be out a while readers since I have to get ready for my exams but.....I recommended you to read one of the novels that is similar to mine but not created by me it called robot upgrade something....
The grammar is so bad it cracked me up, but as a fellow author (on a different account), I must give you a 10/10 for courage. Your ideas are good but you should get an editor to fix your grammar and help structure your chapters more. Hope this helps!
It was a nice idea using ultron in a cultivation world. But it look weird the way the system work, it should be something like "i was reincarnated in another wolrd just to be made a slave/host of ultron? lol"
Not much to go on with just 1 chapter, I’ll stick around to read. Just curious how often it will update: 1 - As the author feels 2 - once a month 3 - once a week 4 - once a day 5 - mass production ✍️ Would be great if you can let us know ✍️ Yours will be the first origion story I’m reading on this app, and I’m curious as to how it will all play out🙏 (Rating subject to change in future)
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my friend, allow me to be blunt; as you admit, your grammar is certainly terrible, with overuse of slang and lack of proper spacing makes it difficult to read as it appears as one long rant. as far as world building is concerned, sparce would be putting it lightly, with one prodominant issue i find that, to be fair, isn't a problem with you alone, and that is the lack of explanation regarding cultivation; i keep seeing so many different things in such stories that i feel like they're being made up as one goes along. however, i must admit that i do want to see where this story goes, or perhaps where it could POSSIBLY go, but first it needs cleanup, and lots of it; i'm not the only one struggling with this, and that's a right shame given that you strike me as a real creative fellow. sort yourself out. maybe ask for help in translation. and i'm sure you'll go far.
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So 4-5 chapters a week, it's been 3-4 months O_O ok don't make a book if you not gonna finish it cause peeps cant just not read something they started.
i think the writer purposely do the grammatic error base on the chapter i read. well. im gonna read it more...good luck for your exam..hope you're not screwing up written exam by purposely do grammatical error on your paper.
This novel has so much potential, because who wouldn't want to be Ultron. A badass robot that can create thousands of himself. This could be like a Army Building novel where Ultron makes Ultron Sentries like in the movie. The grammar was so horrible that I could die. And it looks like the author won't fix the grammar and he is starting a new novel so maybe someone could start this novel over and make it better.
I like the story and ur Grammer not that bad tho good work and also I need 140 words sooooo diejjeejedjjrjrrjrjrjejjwejjeejjefjfjjfgjfrkkewkwjsjddjjffjjfjf xD
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Great and nice original story worth to read readreadreadread readreadreadread readreadreadread readreadreadread readreadreadread readreadreadread readreadreadread
it's an interesting start, looking forward to the new chapters. the concept is quite good just like "in a different with naruto system" I hope this story is the same
This is a great idea for a story. So far its good.You just really need an editor or someone fluent in english to check your grammar. Alot of sentences dont make sense, some are confusing and periods are missing too, among other things.
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Looking for this quality of novel xD and am here boisss jk..ignore me coz i just wan to write a review but it need 140 freaking word so am i...wait may i ask why Ultron xD i hope this novel can keep up with release speed ...that all ty and ty *Run
Cool idea but sad he can’t have a waifu😥lol.Jokes aside fix the grammar and I think it would be a pretty cool story.( 140 140 140140 140 140140 140 140140 140 140140 140 140140 140 140140 140 140)
Don’t understand why people are giving such bad ratings . It’s an original novel idea which is pretty good. Will be cool to see how he evolves in this world. More chapter releases would be appreciated though.
The story isn’t bad but man that synopsis really makes things seem werid lol. Honestly some of these original novels that are coming out are as whacked as heck.