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The line between life and death is thin.
With the numerous religions giving some glimmer of hope, people started hanging onto their thin rope. In an attempt to ease their minds about the unknown.
But what if death is not the end?
What if Death is only the beginning?
Red lives in a vulnerable world, one where Windows to other planes of existence open often.
Monsters and dangerous creatures reside in each, and the awakened are humanities only hope.
Our story starts with Death and ends with Glory.
Follow Red as he breaks through Worlds, practicing and growing stronger with each experience.
The chosen Champion of the mysterious God.
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Love the new cover. story still as good as i left it, can't wait for more chapters man. keep up the good work and i hope this novel gets the readers it deserves.
Amazing story with a smooth development, good character evolution, if you like monsters other words and systems you will love this novel !!!
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The development of the mc is great. love liz and her friends. also loved how the mom changed after getting all the stress off her shoulders, it was realistic. keep up the good work.
The author seems to be new at this. there are some parts that needs improvements, but the story and characters seem interesting, can't wait to see how it develops and how he'll grow.
this is a nice book with a cultivation and magic going on but its more of magic in the moment hope to see more cool stuff in cultivation and making both strong power for the mc to use
This story is great. I love the thrilling events and all those near death experiences he had. I can't wait to see what will happen to him during his stay in the academy. I love the story on how he got and keep his powers to protect everyone who's important to him. Please keep on giving us a very creative and unique plot for the story. Keep up the good work.
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Amazing work for a new author. i thought this type of story is used too much but you slowly started to change it and it has a different feel than the rest of them. great work. recommended.
Got confused a couple of times. author needs more experience in writing. forgotten characters, not sure if the author has other ideas for that or not, the mc is busy probably so he didn't have time to contact his old friend but what about the rest? and the bully what happened to him?
I really like how the story is progressing. the other world and stuffs it's crazy. I love the way how you write too. can't wait to read more from you.
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The Writing Quality needs to be improved The Story development is good...the concept is very interesting,,, Most of the MC reincarnate or Reset one time but in this novel, he did it twice xD looks like there is a powerful entity who is hell-bent on something and using Red for it...can't wait to know what is going to happen next.
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Needs some work. can tell the author is improving little by little with every chapter. great story idea, characters and can't wait to see him explore the other world. great work
Story and development of the characters are great. The author is slowly improving, and loving the road he's taking with the story. can't wait for him to find a way to break the barrier and enter the other world. keep it up <3
no sudden powercreep. balanced ranked system and "who strongest who rule" stuff that well implemented here at first two chapters ive read. added it to my library as a fan of a genre like this!
Really good then he reset the world into a new world if he wanted to go to a new world should have done from the start it kinda ruined it for me.
Not bad, i love the system and the dungeon thing. great work Monopia, can't wait for more chapters. you need to improve your writing skills, their good now but you could do better.
Great story so far keep up the good work. The story and the characters are interesting can’t wait to see what happens next in the new chapters.
The story is great. red and sam stopped talking or seeing each other later and you didn't give a reason, that includes some of the other characters you introduced at the starts. you even started introducing a girl and what i'm guessing is that reds mom started working with them, but you didn't elaborate on that either. but again, i'm loving where the story is going.
Great work J. can't wait to see where the story goes. love the idea about the other world and all that. I noticed the character slowly getting more cold blooded and not caring, i like that.