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Battle Emperor Fu Sheng is the most popular player in the game, The New Age. Everyone believes that only he will become the champion in the final battle! His real name—Lin Jie. The reason for his participation in the battle is to win the Capsule of Revitalization for his injured mother and sister. With the Broken Blade, a Heritage weapon, in hand, he finally makes it to the final battle! Only then does he realize that his best friend had betrayed him! After his devastating defeat, Lin Jie is shocked to realize that he had time-travelled all the way back to a few years ago when the beta version of The New Age was just about to launch!
With all my knowledge of the game...
Pros on the leaderboard? All of them my underlings!
First kill of a BOSS? Mine!
First clear of the exclusive dungeon? Still mine!
Whatever I lost in the past, I’ll get them all back!
Whoever brought me trouble, you’re as good as dead!
When I have the chance to do it all over again, I WILL BE EMPEROR!
I am Fu Sheng, the STRONGEST warrior in The New Age. No one, absolutely no one, can stand before me!
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De he/she just say God Of War?! With a Super?! So basically you're telling me that its Super Kratos?! Kratos 2.0?! More overpowered Kratos?! My real question is: Is BOY included?!
Website : qidian china Views : 2.77million Rating : 9.3(669) Chapters : 700 approx Status :completed Word count : 2.19million author level : lv4 No of works : 2 Disscussion : 561 Year started : 2014 Chinese title : 重生之超级战神 Guys my current favorite novel is "Beautiful Time With You". It's one of the best romance novels I ever read! I know many of you might be hesitating cuz it's Ye Fei Ye novel! I can understand that! But I promise you it's a very cute and prolly the funniest novel with like zero heart wrenching moments! Give it a try guys! MC is very different and also super surprising thing is ML isn't a complete jerk! Also guys check out my book "The Statsguy's Mag" on my profile if you're considering reading a book or not or for some recommendations!
I'm going just give this a 5 star because of the large number of people rating it low just because of the synopsis. It doesn't necessarily mean it's bad, I've read something that seems like the standard Chinese novel yet completely surpassed my low expectations. Even if you think it's bad, don't review without reading.
Read up till the latest chapter, have to say, I'm glad I didn't vote for this trash novel. The summary was pretty telling on what kind of novel this will be, and I was not wrong. There is no consistency in the author's writing. He writes himself into a corner, then break the wall behind him so that he isn't cornered. Plot is typical subpar revenge types, and from many of the chapter comments, seemed to be a patchwork of other novels too. Says there's no job restriction in equipment, items all appeared with job restrictions. Game only up for first day and MC already grabbed 3 or 4 "hidden" quest? Milk a skill for easy monies. Meet beauties. Meet cardboard "arrogant young master". Meet a good number of "elites". Get noticed by "elites". Assuming MC has been playing continuously because super nutrients, what about the "elites"? 1 day old game, already people claiming themselves "elites" lol. Already there's "established elite/legendary guild". Also, exp needed to level up is ridiculous, must take casual players months to even get to level 10. Losing a level every time you die is pretty stupid mechanic too, a level 99 dying would probably smash his helmet in rage. I also don't know how the author is gonna write out the revenge plot. If he's not going to be bothered with the traitor and just shoot to the top, then revenge plot without revenge? If he is, then what next? Befriend him again to f*ck his a*s hard? Or just be a giant d*ck to an "innocent" guy who haven't done what he was suppose to do? Anyways, typical revenge plot with sides of plagiarism. Inconsistent and flat story, bland characters with sides of ***ism. This author managed to speed up the decay of the story, mediocre novel overall.
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If you liked Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God for all of it's plot holes, plot armor, annoying side characters, chapters of filler, zero background information on important Characters, terrible world building, Dues ex Machinas out of nowhere, overly smug MC, nonsensical plotlines, Enemies for no reason and all that other Crap: Then look no further as this Novel is ripping it off with little to no effort along with every other VRMMO Story for the last 10 years! Enjoy!
Surprisingly bad... I thought The Almighty Ring would be the worst web novel I would read in 2019, but I was proven very wrong. I'm not sure how much of the problems with this story can be attributed to the translator and editor versus the author, but there are tons of problems. The writing is downright unreadable at times. It feels like entire paragraphs or even chapters worth of vital information missing. I only tolerated a few chapters before dropping this series, but I was already lost and confused by chapter 2. Details are inconsistent and contradictory. Where is the narrative? Did the MC even die? Why doesn't he seem remotely bothered or confused by the fact he went back in time? Is this a normal thing? That "betrayal" wasn't even slightly dramatic, leaving me wonder what the big deal was at the end of the first chapter. Everything appears to be action, which is fine for an action fan like me, but there's no description to go along with that action. It's just "Boom! Things happened" and "MC got this bonus." What little information is given about the MMORPG doesn't make a lick of sense.... Seriously, what is even going on? I'm not sure this can even be considered to have any story development. The story is technically there but, development? No. The pacing is very fast, but there's no narrative or anticipation. Even though a handful of side characters got introduced quickly, there character-establishing moments are weak, and the characters have no depth. The MC definitely has no depth. I'm shocked this even got approval for a translation.
When I started reading, I would like to say it looked promising, but it didn't. (Things like dying in 2 hits or some crap even though he is a famed player, legendary set and the other guy has 11 pieces, says the attack can go through any defense and still gets blocked.) My biggest problem with this story is the inconsistencies. The author contradicts himself at the very least six times per chapter, and in the middle of doing so makes up new rules after he already explained the rules of what he was talking about. 'This potion has a 1% chance of success.' A couple of paragraphs down 'Because the heart and brain is smashed in, this potion has a 50% chance of success!' The author says the npc's are smart, which when he meets one for the first time they seem like actual humans, then 30 seconds later you can't think of them as anything but npc's because they turn brain dead and act on set patterns. The author says that any class can equip any items and the only thing that would happen is his load/weight would go up, which we later find out that not every class can equip any weapon, and there is various penalty's. Another thing that urks me, is that either the translator is making somethings get lost in the process or the author just doesn't like to explain things that aren't bs. Let's also not forget the fact that somehow these guilds on day one (maybe an hour into playing (generous guess)) already have player blacksmiths that made them full sets of armor. Everything in the store has outrageous costs and yet these people somehow already make over five sets of armor. What about the cost of materials, items to help craft (anvils, hammers, calipers ect), place to craft (are they just going to pound iron in the middle of the road?), or even the fact that potions apparently have a 60% chance of failure, can blacksmithing not fail or even have a chance to make inferior/trash items at the least? Oh, and said guild also went into the middle of a dangerous forest (still can't be more than 2~ hours into the game) and found a chest at the top of a tree, which the author described that you could only see a small corner sticking out. The author said there was 5 different grades of equipment, "Bronze, Silver, Sold, Dark Gold and Legendary" (The translator/editor put in 'Sold', not me. But it's obviously gold). The mc gets a gold grade equipment pretty early which I was fine with because he used his past memories to get it. The piece of equipment, however, gives as much as one level up worth of stats, and lets him float like a fair- *cough cough* feather for 10 seconds. This, to me, seems like a high end bronze to mid silver piece of equipment. What would a piece of legend gear give? 3 levels worth of stats and the ability to read minds? But the only mind you can read being your own..... In short, this novels author changes his mind more than a girl changes clothes. (TS lyrics right there.)
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Very much similar to that one reborn thief novel. I had good hopes at beginning but it just seems like your average vrmorpg nothing to special. Maybe it will get better but most likely not. Good luck to those who stick with it let me know at a later time if it’s worth a read
Completely generic story with which blatantly copies other novels.Unlikable mc who only knows how to solve problems with plot armor.He has no skills in the game even though he is supposed to have been one of the best before he got reincarnated.
The worst part of this novel is not the lack of originality but the lack of any sense, how you expect someone let you stab even if they are sworn brothers? And why did you tell the other guy stabs you if you’re gonna change of heart and stab him back? This novel’s appalling... spare the time and chose some other novel if you enjoy the genre.
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I have read until chapter 6 ... and I give up : boring generic and there is absolutly no transistion it's litterally : "I need that, pouf I'm in the good location, I kill the ennemy, I got what I wanted and even more ... now I need that pouf I'm already there and repeat again". It remind me the MMORPG where there is no global map, you just have to clic to start an instance with random players ... good for game like LoL, bad for MMORPG. Well I only went to chap 6, maybe I'll miss a intersting story but I don't think a good story can begin with so much defects.
as trashy as trash come, really, thats all I got to say, wasted my time on this. just another MC who acts like a noob that knows all the secret spits even though hes supposed to be one of the bests, theres no tactic or battle style or ANYTHING for that matter. the authors writing also sucks, full of plot holes and all over the place, and its rushed AF, its the first day of beta and hes already done what takes WEEKS to happen naturally, and it feels soooo forced, horrible writing. trash trash trash!!!
It is perfectly not worth reading or mulling over. It is a book on which I have wasted 46 days reading and it still didn't match my expectations. And it is not about the synopsis. Many webnovels' synopsis are stupid. But this book's author is very bad and not upto the mark at all.
The problem is that I am not truly engaged in reading this. No reason on why he returned back in time. A complete waste of time. And there are other stories that execute the idea even better and with greater enthusiasm. Removed from my library.
It's like a badly written version of RSSG. The MC is supposed to be the battle emperor, but he plays like a total newbie, making bad decisions left and right. The game has also just started, yet theres huge guilds with leatherworkers and blacksmiths somehow supplying their armies with full 'bronze level' armor, allowing them to clear out entire leveling zones? Riiiight... This is something that should happen weeks or months later, not on Day 1. Overall, a terrible read.
Overall, it's mediocre. I, personally do not like it. It's not because it's bad or anything, but almost everything so far has been cliche within webnovel, and it ruins it. It'd been alright if you had just started it off *without* the rebirth. Honestly, that would've been far better.
This is a piece of trash. 1. The MC reincarnates after losing a fight after being betrayed by his "friend", forget to explain how he really died "God killed him" "died of anger" nobody knows. Ohh I went back to the past, hello mom, little sister. What will we eat today?. sh1it! 2. Let's talk about your concern for his family, which at every opportunity clarifies that it is his greatest concern. Sh1it I read 70 chaps .. and the interaction they had will have been 1/2 chapter and it was irrelevant! sh1it!. 3. The game ... so many things to say ... let's begin, at no time is a time relationship between the real world and the world within the game clarified which can confuse them; the MC has knowledge of powerful items and only decides to get a few and several by chance. he only cared about the sealed sword, with trash statistics that falls when he dies and that in order not to be recognized he decides not to use it in important moments .. sh1it! If you are not going to use it for great things, leave it in a deposit in the city and look for something of less quality that has better attributes and you can use it. Their enemies, all obtain large amounts of equipment and skills of equal or superior quality to the MC and only God knows where. 4. Mc skills as a player or strategist are rubbish! Noob enemy elites without knowledge of the game put him in trouble or even almost killed him. his awareness of the environment is appalling, he was ambushed a large number of times and has never detected it before. Great skills from one of the 'best' players in the game. sh1it. 5. His greatest enemy ... who curiously is not the one who betrays him, but someone who came out of nowhere and according to the MC is the ruin of his family who suffered a car accident and who is believed until now to be a coincidence, sh1it! How does that make any sense! In the game they meet and the enemy says "ohh we ambushed you for that sword xx (your biggest secret that nobody should know yet) kill him". sh1it! There is a legendary wiki that this antagonist can access to know everything the stupid MC has and how the hell it works. sh1it! Anyway, don't waste your time on this garbage, which is a bad copy of other works full of holes in the plot.
My 4th grade nephew once told me a story about his field trip, and it still a better story than this.
This was awful. I know this review will be deleted as all bad reviews are. But this novel is really trash. I turned off my brain to keep reading but I just found myself getting more and more annoyed. What kind of MC is this even? One thing that was incredibly stupid is that Qiu Yuan or whatever tf her name is. The MC helps her team with one clear. Then she starts to act like he is supposed to help them with everything afterwards. Why?? And then there's the whole brotherhood shiz. I mean, he did the whole work, he provided basically everything for the dungeon and he even told them before hand! Yet, at the end, they act like he has committed a deadly sin. Did I read this wrong or what??? Yeesh. What a piece of garbage, really.
Seriously how is this ranked so high? I mean I know my comment will be erased like all my previous comments on other novels but still. How is the MC even betrayed? The dude literally walked up and stabbed the guy in the chest like some cheater who paid off his opponent if anything I was happy that he was tricked as the guy is literally retarded and then he died? What?? What is this Sword Art online 2.0? The plot literally jumps from him dying to all of the sudden waking up in the past and he accepts it within seconds/minutes of waking up no problem. It then jumps to him solving all his family problems and ends up in game where it is suppose to be the first day of the game going live. Instead I don't know what the author was smoking but it feels like the game has been live for years as all of a sudden "elites" and guilds are popping out of nowhere with no real explanation on their backgrounds other than the characters being flat with no real character other than antagonizing the MC. Don't even get me started on the ridiculous 57000 exp required to level up to like 80% of level 2. I literally felt my balls hurt and want to smash my sexy laptop after reading this crap. 12 chapters in and I feel like this story is one of the worst pieces of crap I have ever seen. There are tons of stories better than this pile of crap ranked a lot lower and somehow this is near the top? Please if you are going to treat your readers as retards as least make it slightly believable Qidian.