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Teen reborn into the Naruto series as a senju. Im going to try something different hopefully it works.
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Inconsistent. Author often switch MC’s name which is Robin to Michael, which I heard from someone the MC of his other fic. We also have a power to read emotions, but after prologue is never seen again. Sometimes he remembers the show. Sometimes he act like he’s new to shīts.
Strict adherence to the canon of history is very depressing. The protagonist is generally sick in the head. The super soldier's serum is generally wrong, too weak. The main character has no super strength, intelligence, speed, regeneration. He is dumb, weak and masochistic. A very mediocre protagonist, he obviously played for the Hero. The person who received the super-soldier serum will dominate the world of the Walking Dead, and your character is just sucking it off. And most importantly, only a suicide will follow Rick. Rick is such a mediocre leader that I feel very sorry for the people following him. Impulsive, emotional, depressive and mentally unstable. It is dangerous to follow such a person. And I don't understand why the main character obeys and follows such a person and endangers his sister and his woman. Having the same opportunities as the protagonist, you can very well get settled in the world of The Walking Dead. But your character is just missing out on every good opportunity, it's sad.
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Very good novel and I like the main character is awesome and I love the show. also Is the mc not as Strong as captain America beacuse the mc is fully grown?
I find this story very interesting and easy to read. I love the robin hood mix as well and look forward to what the future of this novel is like.
Nice story so far. Keep up the good work and let the chapters flow —/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/— !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Interesting........ Never read a walking dead fanfic before.......... looking forward for more updates ....................................................
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Hey hope you upload More chs Waiting for it …………………,…….. Or is it dropped ………………………………………………………………………..————————-2–2—————————————/////////-
please continue I enjoy your writing very much you put amazing detail in your store it's amazing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
1-The author changes the name of the MC 2-Is a copy of the canon 3-There is no reason for the acting of the MC 4-The MC dont use the future knowledge 5-The author forgot one of the powers of the MC 6-The CA serum is nerfed 7-The dialogues are the same that the ones from the tv show
good, not enough updates, the story kinda slow but everything else is fine hopefully less romance with maggie cuz its taking up the whole story like:"oh no robin is gonna die", "nvm he is alive yay", "now lets cry and tell to never do it again even though he will"
Nice so far. Interesting story. Need more. Nice so far. Interesting story. Need more.Nice so far. Interesting story. Need more.Nice so far. Interesting story. Need more.
calidad de la escritura (3/5); estabilidad de las actualizaciones (3/5); desarrollo de la historia (2/5); diseño de personaje (2/5); fondo mundial (2/5).
Um I haven't read the book yet but the title and summary are 2 pretty different things. I'll take a peek at what the book is about... _____________________________________