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>English is not my main language as you all will see
>Will try my best to make the story enjoyable and can not promise that everyone will be happy as let's be real not all can be pleased
>The early chapters will be a bit slow-paced for the continuity of the story
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Lie Fan was a Normal High School student who loves The Three Kingdoms History, He already plays all of the three kingdoms games and read the Romance of the three kingdoms.
When he was walking home from school he encounters a very strange necklace in the street, when he takes the amulet he was reincarnated to the three kingdom era which was 17 years before the beginning of the yellow turban rebellion
“Finally I can change the course of history!”
Follow Lie Fan in his struggle to rewrite history with the help of a system
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Please don't drop this novel and in the future, if possible, create a new novel that is contracted but about the Europeans because you have a huge potential Tang12.
Finally there is a good ROTTK based novel on WN!!! There is a shortage of Romance of the Three Kingdoms novels on WN, and even in the internet unless you are a MTL masochist you wont be able find many of them. So it great to have a new ROTTK novel on WN, now to talk about novel in more details. Writing Quality - 5/5 - English is my second language, but I don’t remember spelling or grammar mistakes. In addition everything is clear and is easy to read. Updating Stability - 5/5 - So far we are getting daily updates and sometimes there is 2 chapters a day so everything is great. P.S. If you were you need to make a break, please leave some kind of notice, it’s very frustrating when author leave for some time without notice. Story Development - 5/5 - We got a fan of ROTTK reincarnated in this exact times and gets a system as bonus. At first we were able to see how MC started to grow his power and preparing for the future. It’s worth mentioning that system doesn’t make him OP, honestly apart from him using it for a map and getting some rewards I don’t even remember about its existence which is certainly a big plus for me. Also real characters act in accordance with their character in ROTTK. Overall so far we got an exiting story where you always wait for a new chapter. Character Design - 5/5 - Lets start from a real characters, they are acting in accordance with their ROTTK counterparts which is great. When it comes to original characters they are fine; nothing bad you can say about them. The most important, our MC is also good, first of all he doesn’t scared of changing the future and just life’s his life, so far everything was great but there is only 48 chapters, so there is no time to see the character development. World Background - 5/5 - Romance of the Three Kingdoms is a great piece of literature and novels based on it certainly doesn’t have problems with a world background. Overall this novel became one of my favorite ones and I’m exited to wait for new chapter and see the future story of our MC.
Hlo fellow novel readers, this is great and good novel with everything from Writing to story. But is has far too less chapters for me, as I already have caught with latest chapters. Can anyone recommend more novel like this as I only have one in my mind. But it also just started and has less chapters but got a great potential. If you wannna check it out. Don’t forget to like my review if you find that story good. Name Holographic Conjuring Syatem Hey, don,t forget my like on this review. This book got 2 chapters for now but still great so far.
It's ROTK fanfic so I raised my hopes high. And actually, author seems to know his craft. What just irked me is the weird formatting of the story. Wrong punctuations and capitalization all over the story made it hard for me to focus on the plot. I don't care about wrong grammar or spelling, my brain is already too used to mtling Chinese stories so I don't have problems with wrong grammar/spelling. As long as I can understand the meaning, it's all okay. But in this novel, my problem is different. I always got distracted by the weird formatting. I'm not sure if that is part of author's style, but whenever I want to get immersed in the story but noticed so many distractions midway, I feel like murdering people. The feeling intensified the more I read the next chapters and see that the formatting is still the same.
A good story with good pacing, there's always a daily update, and the author informed us if he can't update or something comes up, not ghosting us like some who do that keep up the good work author!
It has been a while since I last found a good Three kingdom novel like this it is good
The story is good so far and it's easy to read with no grammar mistakes from what I read (I can be wrong as English is my 2nd language) Characters are pretty good like their counterpart in the novel and game, OC characters have some development but are not too focused on them except for one who becomes RO and 5 stars in my book as I like to read the historical characters lol So far so good keep up the good work! I have a busy time in life and reading this become a part of my resting time, I even haven't searched for another book in Webnovel because of my busy time!
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As a fellow author, it's good to see someone trying to make a story about Three Kingdoms as well. I know that it can be tricky on some parts, but it is fun to write. BTW, I added a Three Kingdoms tag for you.
Great I like this novel I always want a novel about The three kingdoms The plot is good and I think this novel has a great start and always make’s me want to read it all over again
A really great novel with lots of historical elements that for me, who lives in Brazil and has never studied about China, is fantastic about how rich and glorious ancient China was.China has at least 4 thousand years of history, it deserves great respect.
This is another review of mine, focusing more on criticism. this novel has 2 problem the first one is typos which is not really a problem because the author update everyday, which is tiring. the second one is the way it's written it could be better, in the first few chapters this was a problem but as story progress this become less a problem. But this is just a recommendation on how the author can improve his writing which works like this. Cao Cap: i Will destroy you liu bei for attacking my territory Liu Bei: Haha! go on and try cao cao! this is the day you fall! try doing this- Cao cao was angry and anxious of what's happening on his territory because of the sudden attack of liu bei causing him to be angry which result in continously screaming at liu bei, while liu bei simply taunt and with full confidence trimuphly think that this is the day his archenemy falls. As the story progress i noticed this happening which improved the story on another lvl but it would be appreciated if this type of writing become a norm and continue progressively, while i don't see any problem with the former the new way of writing cause its quality to improved.
This is the best ROTK fan fic ever!! I can't explain in much detail so I'm just gonna give you guys my very honest and simple opinion from chapter 1 to the latest chapter which I stated above, it's a level higher from another ROTK fanfic Three Kingdoms: God-Level Choice System (it's dropped) but if you didn't think so and you read ROTK fanfic that is good please give me the name please and I'll read it ( I just love ROTK fanfics so much)
Author Shameless review RTK is a novel that I made 4 years ago but stopped due to complicated problems and decided to rewrite it all from beginning in which now I continue to try update regularly every day I hope everyone enjoys reading it and leave an honest constructive review like pointing out my mistakes or grammars! ✨