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摘要
Self-Insert reborn in the Avatar World with the power of Scorch Release Kekkai Genkai. Would Self-Insert beat Azula? Why does Ozai wants him dead? How did Self-Insert get to drink Tea with Iroh?
This is my first work on this website, so please write reviews if you want more of this story
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I personally think my fanfic is pretty good so far. Interesting plot is to be expected since I am good author. So overall I would say that everything written so far is quite exciting and funny.
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it's realy well done and awesome. the story aka plot is awesome the fighting scenes rule my only complaint is he is attracted to mai not azula