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A guy dies and gets reborn in arcane with a couple wishes.
*Finally have some time to start writing again and have to start something that i could make short or long depending on how I feel.
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A really interesting fic, the MC has a lot of potential and although he will look OP, remember that the power scale of LoL-verse is very unbalanced, other than that, good fic
it is grat story but it needs more chapters if you culd add mor chapters it wuld be my favorite fan-fic i have to type more in order to post this so yeah lalalalaalalalaaalalalalalaalalalalalalal
this novel is really good, I really hope that the author don’t stop posting this.
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More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
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The truth is that this story lacks a lot. Let's start with his powers, he's basically an op monster, which wouldn't be a problem if it weren't for the fact that the story focuses more on him receiving power, and hardly even uses them. The writing and narration leave much to be desired. It is mostly a dump of information where it says what he does, while the dialogues are scarce and too simple, as if the characters had no life, they were just AI.
A fun and well written fanfic. MC has massive potential for well...anything really, and the author has taken it in a very interesting direction. Looking forward to read more! ^^