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摘要
”Look.” someone shouted pointing at the stone faces of the Hokage's on the Hokage-mount.
“What are you pointing at?” his friend asked with annoyance but upon turning towards the mountain he became completely shocked “Ahh≈”
very soon the whole village drowned in a heated discussion “It must be that kid. ”
“Yes no one except him could have done it.”
“At first I thought his elder brother is the one who is annoying and unpleasant to the eyes but now I think he is even worse. ”
“Don't you think it looks almost alive? ”
“Now that you say that I think it looks a lot better than how it usually looks. ”
While the whole village is in the commotion on the incident of the Hokage Mountain the person about whom everyone is talking is now sitting beside the Hokage and looking through his crystal ball with pleasure in his eyes.
“Why don't you use transformation jutsu to become a kid and go in there Kazuna? ” Hiruzen asked in annoyance while looking at the Golden-Red haired boy beside him.
“Yeah I also wanted to go but you see when I went inside some sensor Shinobi was also inside however unlike when I was a kid and they would let me in or even like to play with me this time they beat me so hard ... ” while telling his unfortunate story with a sad face Kirito became angry and shouted “Fuck old man why are you mentioning that event as if you don't know? Don't tell me you are the bastard who let out the information to the ladies of the hot spring. "
“I don't know what are you talking about.” Hiruzen said pretending to be serious while thinking inside with a dark face‘Do you think I will let you enjoy the show so up and close while I see it from this small ball? Fat chance...’
“So it was indeed you? ” Kirito looking at Hiruzen's face which is serious in a situation like this understood in a single glance that no one other then Hiruzen had let out his secret and with an angry shout jumped on him “I will fight you to death you basterd.”
“As if I am afraid of a perverted bastard like you? ” Hiruzen also jumped towards him.
“Who are you calling Pervert you old Pervert? ” Kirito punched at Hiruzen's face.
Even before his punch can land in Hiruzen's face a shadow landed in between them and informed “Lord third Kirito has painted the Hokage-mount again and the... ” before he can finish his words a strong punch landed his face sending the person flying through the window.
A few days later
“Don't take my silence as my weakness. ” Looking at half-dead Danzo on the ground Kirito said with a cold face.
“Kill me if you dare kid. ”Danzo who's secrets got exposed during his fight with Kirito knows now that he lost and the proof of his crime is out not only will he lose all his authority but also going to get imprisoned which is worst than death for him.
“Don't play games with me, you crazy bastard because I am not going to let you die even if you beg me after you thought of playing tricks against me and my brother. ” Kirito said mercilessly stepping on Danoz's head and not caring about the old man's screams continued “ Hear me clearly you old bastard now that I am angry I am going to make your life so painful that you will wish death be better than living. ”
From Volume 2...
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Well, based on just the first chapter this has potential. I'd be lying if I said the name Kirito didn't bother me, but I look forward to the future of this story.
The story is too good but i was hopeing the mc is going to play around with so many girls if ur not buildjng a harem. Also hinata is meh man maybe do konan (If you can Do it in the plot) hanabi is good too (if she is not too Young(personally my preferance)
Very good.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Author, if you've seen (https://tioanime.com/anime/shinmai-maou-no-keiyakusha), you couldn't try writing a story, looking at your history of several stories you have.
Ohhhh glad that you remake it. ...If im not wrong the last time he become an anbu and fight with otsutsuki clan? And he is not even 15 and use 9th gate? Maybe i read a wrong fanfic😂😂
Very good.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
So far the story is pretty good. It has potential to be a treasure in the future. The build up is pretty good so far for the story. Some common grammar mistakes, but the ability to understand the story is there. All in all a good start and read for a Naruto Fan Fic.
It`s chapter number 26 and he still is not a genin. I guess Kirito-san lost all his skills after reincarnation, no beater anymore (Yeah i know it`s not Kirigaya-kun, but it`s fair for me, duh). Despite that, the story is very interesting and it oppend my eyes to some crimes of Grin.. Hiruzen. And don`t drop it pls. Are we good? ... Yes? ... Yes :)))
Well i like the story, thought it still have some grammatical mistake i think it would be better as time goes on. Hope you keep the good work and didn't drop this.
The story is good has Gintama references some spelling mistakes and grammar I would suggest Grammarly is free. I would love to get more frequent updates in this
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it's not very interesting, most of this story is a regular flare .......................................................................................
Usually i dont read naruto twin fanfics cause they all have cring name like kirito or something like that but this seems to have Potential 🔥⚜️
I love this novel some people might hate the grammar but I dont really care I just more chapters so please update more so I can enjoy it more and have some R-18 part already
A very good naruto story. Keep up the good work. The only thing, that could be better is the grammar. But nevertheless well written.....................
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The idea behind the story is good. But a lot of editing is necessary. The English quality us very bad and sometimes it is hard to read. The narration is also too rushed and lacks personality. And please use punctuation!! It's making me breathless. The main character is so confusing. His personality is quite plain. Textbook like. And sometimes too forced. As for the story development and world background there is nothing to say. It okay. But the story is worth it. It has potential. Continue to improve yourself Lord Author and thank you for the story.
This story is click bait it’s not a real reincarnation the mc has his memories wiped and is a pedophile.
I would give 5 ⭐️ but the tag says reincarnation but from what I have read it shows nothung that signifys reincarnation minus that instead if one Kushina and Minato had two kids
Sorry for the ones who want this story to be a harem because I am not going to make it something like that but I will, of course, try to make it a good love story and there might be more than one girl for me but that will depend. Also, the story will be concentrated more on action than anything else and sometimes a slice of life with full of fun as the story progresses on. One last thing my English is not good enough. So don't read if you can't understand but If you continue reading than tell me which part you are unable to read in your comment and I will try my best to fix that part of the story. Thank you for reading.