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摘要
This is a Story of Adam, who is a Orphan, but due to his Talent he became a Engineer and got a regular job, and he was a great fan of anime like Naruto, onepiece and all and, but later he saw Game of thrones and literally became fanboy of it.
Life was going on but one day when he was 27 years old, he died due to heart attack, and found himself in the world of Game of thrones, and he was reborn as Jon snow.
On the age of 7 he activate a System, which was named as God System.
The system gave him the 5 beginners gift.
1. A Dragon egg: Model- Monster Zero
2. Library of Knowledge (Infinte knowledge)
3. Body of Hashirama Senju
4. Training dimensions
5. Template cheat
Watch the amazing journey of Jon snow, as he becomes Powerful as god.
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寫檢討when I see monster zero I already know that gonna be Ghidorah but I'm gonna marinate this work and comeback after 1month so hoping for many chapters to read this good luck
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
The biggest thing that bugs me about this fanfiction is that the writing quality is not the best. The Author loves to repeat what happened in the previous chapter in the newest chapter. Like the last 2 to 3 paragraphs of the last chapter are the 1st two to three paragraphs of the new chapter. Also it has a disorganized feeling to it and somewhat bad grammar. If you can handle the repetition, bad grammar, and the confusion from disorganization then it is a Massively OP SI as Jon Snow from GOT. Overall:
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This story is just incredibly dry. Most (if not all) of the work is actually AI. Author is very lazy in my opinion. He could've made this story better, but instead he refuses to use his brain and in the end the story is not fleshed out. The most I can rate this is 3/5.
Extremly short chapters and half of them is recap from previous one. Story is boring and pointless. I do not recommend it, in about 20 minutes I've read 15 chapters and I can no longer continue it, it bored the living shit out of me.
La premisa era buena, pero cual es el punto de darle todo al principio para que el MC sea OP desde el principio y no haya ningún desarrollo.
Stupid character of Mc ,Too short chapter and repeating previous chapters line in next chapter to make up word count.
This is stupid. 1. he has access to every knowledge and he only access what Naruto and magic from GOT. Why not Harry Potter, MCU, dc or any other isekai or manhwa style of magic. The best knowledge I can think is about skill/power creation. 2. you have access to a training dimension that gives you any thing you need to train, blacksmith material, potion material, cooking material and has infinite chakra and magic flowing in it. Mc can take things from this dimension, at this point this is not a training dimension but a personal dimension with its reality in your control. 3. Too much repeating of words. like i want to create a kingdom that is best, but did mc actually learn about kingdom building and management from infinite knowledge. 4. Personal opinion, Why mc is not learning magic from every branch, and using shadow clone jutsu to continuously learn new things, also he need to create a soul a.i that catalogue and process information in his brain.
作者 MR_Fanfic
What's the point of having an extremely powerful MC in the GOT universe? A lot of unnecessary things System...Ghidorah... Hashirama's body. GOT fans don't follow to see brilliant power, but rather for the development, construction of a kingdom and dispute politics. The MC is in the wrong universe, if it were in DC/Marvel it would be more interesting.