/ Fantasy / Reborn As A Nephilim: The Rise of A Manaless Prince
摘要
[Webnovel Spirity Awards 2022 Entry]
Strength.... That's all that matters in the end.
After being abandoned by his own family, and shunned for having no mana in a world dominated by magic, ex-prince Arvell Relas Vispia was forced to live on the streets with whatever meagre money he had left.
However, fate had something else in store for Arvell.
After meeting the spirit inhabiting his amulet, Arvell gets reborn as a Nephilim.
A being that has the powers of a god.
Time, Space, Life, Death.
All submitted to the authority of a Nephilim.
Betrayed by those he once called family, Arvell swore to get revenge.
Revenge on all those that mocked him and shunned him as a 'failure.'
Revenge on those who betrayed him without a second thought.
This is a tale of how a young prince shunned by the world as a 'failure' rises and ascends to the pinnacle of strength.
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Shameless author review here. Hey! I'm the author for this series, and I hope you enjoy it! If you have any comments or suggestions please let me know! Ideas for potential plot directions are also welcome. Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy my series! As I am a man of culture, this series is not harem.
Here before this book shines! Simply a masterpeace. amazing writing quality. A hard working and amazingly overpowered mc. and a great world building. i especially like the magic concept here. the aether and nether, and how the mana is just a lower level version of these two. just amazing~~
Honest reviews are here.. This novel is not good, but I can't say it is bad either.. This is not reincarnation or transmigrated MC.. This novel is about the MC, which is a prince of an empire who has not awaken any mana in his body.. Because of that, MC has been exiled by his own father and treated as garbage by whole country.. Later, MC awakens with help from "Nephilim Spirit," which changes his race, guiding and teaching him aether (better version of mana in this novel) and nether body, teach him alchemy and many other knowledge of the past.. That Spirit has a VERY VERY annoying character.. Seriously.. Well, the author is the one who created the character like that.. I kinda hate the way the author wrote such as, MC is not strong, super slow growth MC, many unexplained mysteries, there to many slice of life scene (80% of this novel) than fighting/training scene, slow chapter update, and lastly, many skip scene.. 1. Many skip scenes ■Let me give an example of what I mean by many skip scenes.. Let's say you watch Detective conan anime.. Mostly, detective conan is divided by two episodes for MC solve the case.. Imagine you watch 1st episode and then the case end.. You thought that the case would continue on the next episode, but it actually is not.. Because on the next episode or any further ahead, there are no cases related to that.. You feel like, "Seriously, what happened to that case??" Yes, there are many these types of scenes in this novel.. 2. Weak and slow growth ■I had caught up with the latest chapters.. For me, the MC growth is quite slow.. Tooooo slow.. The author did try to brainwash his reader by keep saying in this novel how fast the MC growth and how strong MC is.. But it is not.. ■The growth is too slow for me.. The author also says that MC is super hardworking, but to me, the MC barely increases his stat throughout his training.. There are many arguable facts for this novel.. For example, Aether is supposed to be a better version of Mana, like ways better than pure Mana, and we won't see any advantages of it.. We can see the advantage of nether body thru MC stat and compared them to other people stat which MC as 1st circle warrior stat are at same level as 3rd circle warrior stat.. ■But the author keeps showing that MC can't win any fight against 2nd circle.. The author even writes thru MC's word, "That 2nd circle guys can defeat me in 99 different ways even when I fight him with all my strength." Even though MC is at 1st circle, his stat is at 3rd circle, but he can't beat 2nd circle if that person uses his mana. Dude, MC has Aether, and that thing is supposed to be wayyyyys powerful than mana.. It is the same as MC affinities. He has an affinity for time, space, life, and death, but he is not using them during fight.. You can say that this author is not a good writing a fighting novel because most of this novel is like the "MC slice of life" type of novel.. 3. Unexplained mysteries ■The author also loves to add mysteries it many situations.. For example, the author wrote about "the letter" and kept talking about it without mentioning what "that" is.. There are also situations where MC talks with his master about "that power" and talking about it when we dunno what he actually means.. ■The author justified it by saying, "MC is too weak to know or it useless to know. It is just a burden, if you know.." Yes, unfortunately, there are many more similar situations where the author keeps saying "that" without explaining what he meant.. There is also a scene that suddenly, the author ends it just like that.. Like the scene when MC died, no scene what happened in his family situations.. Like how they react, his father, or his mother, or someone who hate MC or his twin sister who adore him.. That is it, no update related to them at all.. This is not OP novel YET.. Maybe this is the author 1st fighting novel, so there are a lot of things he needs to improve.. I hope he gets better in writing.. I will come and read again when this novel reaches his endings.. But seeing this novel barely updated, I'm not sure if I am still alive when that time comes..
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I gave up after chapter 60. If you want slice of life, this is the book for you. But it wasn’t sold as such. And my review reflects that. I feel as if my coins were wasted.
So it's not bad. The comedy it's just out of place and that makes it hard to read.
The premise of the story is interesting. A young prince of a particularly unfair kingdom is found to not have any magical abilities and is exiled. When all seems lost, he is transformed into an angelic species, a nephilim, and gets to prepare his revenge into the rival country. The story is however not particularly well written, and it’s not just because of the recurrent typos (which seem to often be caused by an autocorrector). It is frequent for the author to make long redundant descriptions when the point was already well conveyed in one paragraph. The character is often justifying his actions over and over when his motives were already sufficiently obvious given what we knew of him. Sometimes the author repeats what he just said, as if he never reread himself or has unfinished sentences. In short, the story suffers from a lack of editing, proofreading.
I had a beef with the author when it seemed this novel was dropped and planned to blast him to heaven(dont mind me😂😂😂😂) Wonderful novel Intriguing plot Ok characters Im blank about the world development All in all wonderful story Please don’t drop
it starts off really great, a few plot holes but not big or bad, but tha. later on they start happe ing more and more, like how he is supposedly as powerful as a high level knight ut he has to poison people to win a fight eve. though he is also highly trained in a lost sword art but can't take on two low level guards because it's not worth his tike to rescue some slaves even though tactically speaking it would be better to have multiple people running in different directions to give a false trail.... just kinda lost me. Story feels forced.
I was wonder is he like Ares doesnt hide his strength and ruthless enough to kill his enemies and manipulate them
Overall one of the greatest novels I have ever read, although updates are a little slow it can’t be helped. This story has some of the most interesting characters I’ve ever read about and the character development for arvell is one of the best. This story makes me wish the author did this full time because I am itching for new chapters. Overall a 10/10 and I can’t wait to see how the rest of the story develops.
This novel have a fresh story within it, I guarantee you will not be bored to read it. Why? Didn't I tell you that the story from this novel is fresh? The story is different from other novels and very interesting, this might be a new wind for the novel world.
This one is actually BETTER than the other one and has improved a lot (mainly cause zxl is proofreading and editing) i believe this guys updating each day right now? anyways as the story progresses the world background also gets clearer new characters and good plot(for now idk if it gets better or not, im a pioneer in the disc so i get rights to read some non edited parts) but yeah recommend read not too fast except the time skips ahem ahem
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Having a blast with this novel so here's a little 5*. Hope for the best in the future! .
I'd like the way you write the first chapter how everyone he live turned their backs on him because of his defective stats as a royal truly shows how a person holding power would do if they see someone who is not even worth noticing
This book is really intresting! I like the premise of the betrayed mc coming back stronger, as well as the detail to the world! The author put a lot of detail into world building from what I've seen so far
The story starts off quite well and honestly builds up the Mc from the start, to me I see this story already has a lot of potential and I look forward to what the author does in the future chapters! keep up the amazing work Author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]