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摘要
my take on being reborn into the dance of dragons
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
great story you should keep it up also you should make a female oc stark as queen also like the conquer had starks are the most underrated in all fics and novels also they are one of the most innocent in all of GOT they always only wanted to keep their pack safe and do their duty as lords you already have great impression on first man in story follow it through make an OG female stark the MC wife along with denereys and have her understand their POVs and make them his wives(both treat each other like siblings but have healthy rivalry) a true family, pack, make magic rise again help north prosperous develop them with starks to prepare them for long night and maybe also start following old gods as valyria had fire and north had ice you can merge both pantheon after doom the radical gods die in doom and remaining join old gods to survive and make magic thrive
A very good story, so far the creation of the character has been very clear so you can imagine the main character's face well and so far there has been good plot development and the grammar is not bad. The author and a good listener asks for feedback to always improve his writing.
good story all 3 of them more update on steady rhythms and can rach ranking board