/ Anime & Comics / Rebellion of His Creations (SI)
摘要
Trash novel, don't read if you are easily triggered by my shitty writing.
Anyway, the title is self explanatory and literally what this fic gonna be.
World?
-Youjo Senki
-Fate Zero
-Genshin
-Honkai
-Warhammer [Current]
-Rwby
Power?
-OC and nerfed [The Gamer] system.
Edited [21-04-21]: Mc become op but also didn't when compare to the last boss.
Harem?
-Dunno, my readers mostly dislike harem so no plan for now.
Edited [02-02-23]: I never said there will be no harem. So...
-We have Tanya Degurechaff and an OC character named Charlotte.
Edited [21-04-23]: Artoria Lancer Alter and Venti(F) join the harem.
OP MC?
-I hope no and trying to avoid it.
Smart MC?
-I'm literally equipped with 1 brain cell and negative IQ. So an SI with idiot MC probably.
What else I missed... Oh yeah, most important one infact.
How about my other fics?
-Honestly I wanna delete them all. But the effort I spend on them stopped me from doing it. Even myself find them to be a failure. Like for real, do ppl seriously even enjoy the shits I post anymore?
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寫檢討
One of the best FF I ever read and I enjoy it very much. Deserves five stars.
From the 14th episode it stopped being an ff and turned into another story entirely. not to mention that he is slowly returning to the harem. While charlot had a personality in the beginning, he was brainwashed and turned into a completely npc, the same thing happened with tanyaya. Frankly, I no longer enjoy it. Even though she knew that Tanya was actually a man and people around knew them as brothers, she brainwashed her to fall in love with herself indirectly. this is out of ff but i think it's going down
the author don’t quit the fic I like everything I wrote incorrectly because of the translator but here are a few places where you need to improve the development of the characters, their relationship and the disclosure of the relationship you didn’t properly reveal this detail in the stories, please carefully write down this aspect of your work
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I seem to forgot go make a self review and I almost reached 100 chapter. So, -Writing quality [3 Star] Tbh, I understand my own writing style is quite lacking in expression and description a lot of time because I just don't know much vocabulary to use them. -Story Development [3 Star] So so, I should say. Never have long-term planning and almost every thing is made up on the go. -Character Design [4 Star] I have few good OC right? even if they rarely appear. -Updating Stability [5 star] Rarely not post in promised schedule. If I did, I will usually trying to post extra chapter to compensate. -World Background [3 Star] Not my original as this is fanfic. So, average I rate my own fic 3.6 Star. This is made with my honest and definitely unbiased opinion.
Hello Daoist Kitty, It looks like you're making a new fanfic huh? I hope this will not be a harem bro because It's been 3 books bruh. LET THIS BE SOLOOOOOO!!!!