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[#r18] [#AU] [Do not translate my work you rulate site bastards.]
During my fight with All For One, a vortex appeared out of nowhere and pulled me into another dimension.
Missing memories, gunshots in the alley, a man in a bat costume, a woman in a bat costume...
[System Online]
I regained my old memories thanks to the System. This is Gotham City, the place where I died before my rebirth in the world of Quirks. Now, I am back again, but surprisingly, only 5 years have passed in this world.
I reunited with my family and friends. But the city is plagued by a series of brutal murders, and endless crimes. It's about time someone put an end to these motherfuckers...
But in the city of darkness, there are some people whom people call heroes or protectors... Yet, when the time comes, they hesitate to make the difficult decision. All they do is put the criminals behind bars only for them to break out and commit crimes again... Not on my watch...
But all the threats are so much human...
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SLOWBURN WARNING
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I don't own DC, Marvel or MHA except for my OC.
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Cover art found on Pinterest.
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The problem with murder is that everyone is a hypocrite, first of all no one has the right to demand that someone kill another person if they don't want to, second it's a law, if you don't like it, get political and change the law, don't worry. complain like a spoiled brat thirdly there are places where it's legal but the rest of the world doesn't imitate them for a reason don't you think? and fourthly there are people who are allowed to kill but nobody wants to go this way as it takes away the fun of believe they are god
It's good overall, in the beginning it's kind of confusing and irritating but once you get into it you'll get hooked. Like getting a burger in some back alley dinner, it may seem stupid and sketchy but it's soooooo good. Give it a try!
I feel like your writing still doesn’t work well for books. I’m not saying your writing is bad, but feels more like a script/storyboard to a tv show (the whole alien scene as an example).
Too much edge tbh. The tone of the chapters and characters sometimes don't match with each other.
Dropped on chapter 32 for reasons.. good writing and characters but certain situation about to happen that i find disgusting… If you can tolerate it then enjoy.
On one hand, superheroes, always a fan when people take that genre and tries their own take on it, but on the other hand...I'm not sure where I would stand on this whole harem, no-harem debate, but hey I trust you know what you're doing
Starting was really good, as the author didn't rush and took things step by step. And it takes place in DCU, which is one of my fav. The thing is people are torn apart by harem or no-harem. Even the harem lovers are having second thoughts. Keep it up.
I just read the first chapter, and the plot was actually simple. But, it was executed properly. The dialogues were good, but what stands out we're the details on each paragraphs .
Read till end of volume 1 in 1 day due to how hooked i got to this fafic, the reason the mc has his op powers is well thought out, the system thing is kinda weird bcz it felt useless the entire time except in those 2 scanning moments so u basically forget it even exists. The characters didn't feel 2D even though he barely interacted with people that aren't his family/close ones so i hope to see more interactions in next volume with the rest of the dc characters. Early part felt kinda boring (slice of life-ish) but it slowly ramps up and the plot twists are good. Overall it's really enjoyable. P.S for people that didn't notice, this is a harem and soo far there are 2 ppl confirmed and 3 unconfirmed LI until later volumes.
The grammar and writing style are impeccable .I like the suspense and the characters overall too . Keep going ! Love it !
Nice as always.. but its just too short and i finished it in just half a day.. imma wait for now so i can bingeeee, ciaooo 👌
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That's some good story I have read in a while. Good MC, proper background, no rush writing, good grammar, stable updates.👍👍👍👍👍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
+5 for quality chapters. It's a great improvement over the author's other works. Main protagonist is well written from what I have read so far. Good read so far. And despite some OP quirks, MC still has weaknesses which we don't see very often. It makes the power balanced.
A perfect start and a likable main character. No complaint about that. The story line is unique and interesting. Not many chs, but yeah, that's some quality writing there. Give it a try if you are into slow burn with proper development.
Here I am with the usual 5 star review. If you have any questions regarding this fic, feel free to ask here. Any typos, let me know and I will fix them.