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Quest for Martial Perfection

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作者: Drew_Studio_565

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A typical cliche of a young boy trying to achieve the peak of martial arts despite being shackled as worthless. However, with the aid of a certain heaven shocking treasure, he is able to step into the vast All Compassing Void where he learns that everything he knew may not necessarily be true, even his own identity. Follow Tian Longmeng as he grows from a talentless child in the wilderness to the Grand Sovereign, all while questioning his purpose for existence.

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amaturewriter

Somewhat similar to the happy xianxia novels...ie: MC has a happy supporting normal family with weak cultivation but finds his hax which is a ship in this case,....its quite its interesting....long chps...well written with proper plot and development.. NOW..normally this would be a suggestion but here I am asking/demanding...dont make this ****ty like other xianxia novels where MC goes after HEAVEN DEFYING BEAUTIES..and in most cases rapes them or gains their " ACCEPTANCE"...cause he is strong...then they separate for some BS and MC collects a massive harem...complete ****ty and shallow relationships...****ty MC and lovers,.....try too build the romance,.......keep it happy and fluff..no sad separation or any angsty betrayal ****...keep harem small........make MC smart and OP and not a naive forgiving idiot,.....kill all enemies no mercy ....... Anyway goodluck.....

4yr
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zd4zaas

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

3yr
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