摘要
He Yuan had accidentally caused his own death. He had no idea he was even dead until he suddenly woke up on the hard floor of an empty room.
What had killed him? Well... for future reference, it's a terrible idea to install a chandelier over your bed.
As he tried to get his bearings right, a strange guy suddenly popped out of thin air and he was offered a job.
The job offer granted him eternal life with the alternative being reincarnation. Most would hastily choose to be reincarnated so they can start a new life but not He Yuan.
He was skeptical, why would anyone want reincarnation? Once you reincarnated 'you' cease to exist. He didn't care about what people said about starting afresh, gaining new memories and all that.
All he knew was that once a person reincarnated, they get thrown into a different environment, different family, meet new people and in short became a different person entirely.
What scared He Yuan the most was losing his own thoughts and hence, awareness of his current self and so, he chose to accept the job.
What did the job entail? He carried out tasks given to him by people who were called 'leasers.' They were called this because they leased out their bodies to 'taskers' for a period of time to help set their crooked lives straight.
What the leasers didn't know was that the taskers got into realms and helped them so they( taskers) could focus on their own main tasks which was world/realm balance.
These realms had 'special ones' who siphoned the luck out of it. Luck was the binding force of these realms so without it, the realms would begin to break apart and deteriorate into unlivable hells.
So in essence, leasers gave put their bodies and 'payment' in the form of soul energy, taskers helped out the leasers while balancing the realms and the realms become stable once more.
Pretty straightforward right? Yes.
But can someone tell He Yuan why these world was so full of hypocrites, Mary sue and Gary stu characters who thought it was excusable to do horrible things just because they were in love?
He Yuan grit his teeth. If you want to be in love, then be in love, was there any need to use others as stepping stones?!
He rolled up his sleeves and bounced forward. Just you wait as I teach you all a valuable lesson!
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Author here: Again, I can't design shit so I snatched the photo from pinterest, credits to the original artist.
If the artist demands I take it down, I would do so without hesitation as I only have my lack of talent to blame.
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Phew ok, I'm going to try and not ramble too much. Me coming across this book was a complete accident that happened like 2-3months ago maybe?? Then I decided to pick it up and boy... it's so good bro. Honestly speaking, it's probably in the top 3 of my fav qt novels and top 5 of fav novels at the moment. Everything seems pretty well thought out and genuinely it's a very interesting and unique novel that gave me a refresher. The arcs explored in this novel are fairly common(there's really so much you can do) but this one puts sucha unique and fun littel spin on every arv that keeps me hooked. I wish I had more free time so Ii could read this masterpiece more. What's appreciated by me personally here is that, although the arcs can be considered fairly short, the characters feel very real. The behaviors and reactions they have towards things feel like how actual people would react. A personal favorite is arc 2 where we get shown the aftermath of what hapoens after our favorite protagonist leaves. It feels real. I don't want to give spoilers because I believe that this book is a jouney you have to travel yourself. Just a personal preference, I also really like the fact that the arcs aren't too long. That's actually what causes me to drop qt novels most of the time, arcs start at like 20 chapters and eventually get to 200+ per world and I get tired and sick of it. The pacing overall is very well done and everything seems like it's on the right track and it's truly an enjoyment to read. I definitely recommend this novel to anyone looking to pick it up. Great work author and thankyou for writing this book <333
Oh Dear Author.....I love you so much for creating this amazing piece of work.....I would really like to beat myself for starting this story so late...... It's such a nice work....and one thing that I liked the most was how the author picked the clichés .....I have nothing against who enjoy them....but what the author did with them was so good. And please don't get me started on He Yuan.....he is such a good MC....I absolutely love this guy.....I just want to hug him so badly......He deserves so much love. The work is really nice....the background, the pacing of story and every little thing can be seen that it is well thought out....and about the LMS arc.....don't feel bad about it author.....because the new one is really good....and I have the reasons you told for removing the previous version......and I feel like they are very much right......this new approach is quite nice.... I just hope people get to know more about this story..... and we have a GONG MC....😌 Take care author and good luck. ❤️
This story is pretty neat There are no grammar mistakes and the sentences are easy to read with the plot flowing smoothly although it seems a bit dull at times as it can feel more like a retelling of events instead off the main characters story but that alone doesn’t make it a bad story it’s plot is very well thought out and you can tell there was research put into the subject for a semi realistic story Overall it’s an good story with only a few mistakes here and there
This is a really nice novel 😌😌 nowadays there are very novels which have nice english translation as well good quality also a unique plot . The author has given much thoughts , time and care to create such a wonderful piece moreover chapter update is also stable .. . .. overall all ++++
Dear author, the book is really good I like it and all that but it’s been a few days since you’ve last updated a new chapter, what happened author? Are you okay, at least give notice as to why you’re not updating!!! 😭 Finals have been finished long ago and you last announcement you said you couldn’t update because we were in Final Exams but they have already passed long ago, 😱 unless you’ve decided to take summer classes, if so please 🙏 say something because we’re here waiting for you to update🥶.
I really really appreciate you author i really love this book and i recommend it for who ever wants to read ❤️☺️ Hwaiting author ❤️ you got this 💜
will be expecting more updates ☺️ from Author_sama and love the stories setting ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I honestly think this is a great book that deconstructs the two genres it's covered in it's two volumes very throughly like the first genre of future lady going back in time to a bullied body and the way the author breaks down this trope is that the future lady here doesn't look further than the view of the narrow minded past lady and thinks of this view as the truth and in the second volume/arc the white lotus omega is seen to have an extremely self centered view and can't be bothered to ask why something is happening or if there is reasoning behind it overall it's a great book as well as the authors other book , and at this point in the story it seems the main character and the system are going to be a couple.
Amazing discovery of a book though I'm not that far along in arc's currently, I've enjoyed the one's I've read so far! The plotline is refreshing as most QT's can get repetitive and the character design is great, with us having glimpses into the mind of the side characters. Personally I love that as it enhances the story and gets you really thinking about the way they act or view things, lol though some have really farfetched or downright evil thoughts, it still helps the storyline as we see them gain karma more often than not. Found this from the sample on wattpad and instantly got hooked, if I had more money in my bank T^T I would buy all the chapters!<3 Sadly I went broke at the end of an arc lol but that just means I need to know what happens NEXT!? I will be back!<3[img=update]
Good stuff, I really love the revenge! Can’t wait to read more. (༶ૢ˃̵̑◡˂̵̑༶ૢ)
So I'm at 🗿I forgot mandrin boy ch23 or 26 and I'm officially broke now QwQ anyways I enjoyed reading It verry much ahh and I really like 888 and He yuan (🗿wait his name is he yuan right 🐌 Don't kill me I really have a koi fish memory) soo The one infuriating thing is that 🗿I thought the ml was pei jjing or smone ⚰️ and the sea was dry no chance for the ship to sail ah ⚰️⚰️🗿but then I was slapped in the face when author wrote that they doubted changing position of the mc 🗿🗿🗿🗿then I realised that The protag was a gong 🗿not a shou aiya it was amazing how easily I adapted to it in the (who let the zombies out arc) and Then I really really liked how adorable 888 was awwww just pierced my mama heart with an arrow I cannot tell you how adorable I find him aiyaaa I really really like it ah 🗿what do I say take 5 star's I'm so happy and and I also like how this novel is really different as all the special ones (really be unreasonable so much that I wished to thow my phone out of the window) with how unreasonable they are 🗿but my koi fish brain likes how they genuinely think that they're right🗿and the mc is also not too op just smaking special ones here and there but I despise their heaven defying luck ah 🗿and their grass vitality 🗿🗿why do they always keep coming back ah how many times I wish to smack em away 💀 but they've got the vitality of mosquitoes 🗿 and Really really author your brain hole is amazing thankyou so much 🗿I mean really reall I love you ❤️and 888 and he yuan ahem- oh oh I also really like to read the system chapters at the emd of the arc ara ara~ ahhhhhhhhhh I read this so good book now what an I gonna doo where am I gonna goo I don't want to finish it *cries in corner* anyways I started ranting again ahem- love you author muahahahaha❤️
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I LOVE THIS BOOK AAAACCCKKKKK!! At first, I was really skeptical about reading it because I didn't think it was any different from all the many QT books I've read and boy was I wrong! It has dog blood drama, it has a really freakibg unique plot, it has characters that would either make you say, "Period! 💅" or "Go lie in a ditch 💀", the dialogue and the scenes could make you rupture a blood vessel or laugh in amazement! This book has so many things to offer so I would totally recommend reading this! 10/10 ✨️ I'm sure the author worked very hard on this so it's only right to support such amazing works! Make sure to free up some time cos you might finish it in one sitting 😭 and some patience for the characters. I'm super glad that I read this book and especially right now that I'm in the right headspace! Thank you for your hard work, dear author! Will continue to support your work! <333
Different from most system novels but it's so good I love it !! ❤️💕 It's my 1# most fav System novel!
Overall plot is good and it is different from other which keeps my interest in this novel . I can't wait to complete this novel it is very interesting . Thank you author keep working on it I support you . And you are too good .
Dear author, you have no idea how much I love this story. From the moment I read the first chapter, I feel in love with its pacing, world building, simplicity and the the story telling that I kept reading every night until 3 a.m. To think I read this story because it popped in my FYP must have been a blessing from God cuz there is just no way I used to scroll past this. Melted_Ore, you have my praise! Even if it takes you two or five years to update, I am willing to wait for as long as it takes! Even if I'm just a random stranger online with nothing to give, I will still support you in my heart ;w; But srsly though, I have read a lot of QT novels and only few managed to do the world building right. So I do quite treasure those few. Bro, if I was rich I would be giving a lot of gifts rn. Also, I do hope you're alright! I just started this novel a week ago and I noticed Webnovels says this has been updated 11 months ago ;w; Please don't abandon this novel 🥹🥹🥹
This is a lovely work. The pacing is spot on, the characters are likable, the plot and underlying plot are interesting and different. Highly enjoyable! Looking forward to more (:
I love the book, one of the good qt novels that I found that aren't too long nor too short per arc. The story is good with mixture of mysteries, although it made my anger rise everytime (specially the family of special ones)
Chapter at the time of this review; 100 Arc at the time of this review; 4th Update stability at the time of this review; 2 chapters a day The first arc was a little rusty but that was because I didn't want to bore you guys but a reader brought to my notice that it was more like a retelling of events (thank you by the way) so from the second arc upwards, there was more dialogue and details. Before you give up on the book please kindly read to the third arc. The romance is slow burn but I promise, you would hardly notice with all the other stuff going on. I try to avoid clichés and repetitive plots in the arcs to give you all a fresh reading experience in a popular trope (QT) so please give it a chance. I gave myself five stars because I have to be my own biggest supporter, lol. See you in the comment section. XoXo