/ Sci-fi / PUPPET MASTER SYSTEM: HOW TO KILL THE MONARCH
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All of a sudden, Jax’s bleak life became even more tragic if he could say to the least.
From the runaway orphan to be a small part time bartender in a bar to make his ends meet, he became a prisoner by leaps and bounds of changes within a blink of an eye.
His life just sucks!
On a fateful night, when he returned from the bar he working in, he found himself witnessing someone being butchered in his own living room, fighting the killer, but then ended up as a criminal!
The trial that was held for him only made everything worse, he was sent to the central southern prison, where most of the notorious criminals would waste their shitty life over.
Everything about his life became dark and beyond darker until two strange men came to him and one of them asked, “how did you feel so far?"
What kind of question was that?! Should he be happy for being arrested for a crime that he didn’t commit?!
And he spoke again, "We are asking, how do you feel about your experiences in this simulated world so far?"
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Damn this is a story with some good potential. Would definitely recommend to read this. **************************************************
Story is still in its development stages but it shows some serious promise . The story has a surprisingly good premise , great grammar and overall is quite refreshing with all the typical system novels that are going around. The mc is relatable and the circumstances that he's stuck in, are quite distinct and unique in my opinion. I hope people are willing to give this a try .
I still not read it but just give the Author a suggestion. The Puppet Master System is a much better name thats what comes after makes me lose interest in this.
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I am passionate about reading a story, with a plot that I have personally experienced, which is why I identify with the work ... And of course one asks the same question: What did he do to deserve this? Any answer, no matter how true, will not change the future ... at least not very soon. Who was that masked man? There are hidden enemies, circumstantial, "by indirect business", perhaps our friendships are not so healthy or innocent or integral. What is the relationship with Mr. Robert (the one murdered in his apartment) None ... And why did he kill him? He is not my sport, nor commission ... nor do I have the slightest idea ... Would you think of escaping? That would make things worse, and in these systems, it would add more misdemeanors and another trial, more years in jail ... Remember justice takes time but reaches it ... Good advice ... even if it lasts 100 years and the body cannot resist it ... I conclude, after reading 3 chapters, with the lawyer's question and answer: Lawyer: So you are innocent and you are being framed ...? I recommend you admit your case for a lighter sentence. Finally, the innocent existential question: What have I done to be in this problem? Being at the wrong time, place ... How to know the intentions of others against us ?. I invite you to read a good and detailed description of the scenes, character, thoughts of the character ... an experienceable story.