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章節 5: chapter 4

I've been walking for 10 minutes

honestly I do not know where the fuck I am

uhh why is there a crowd here

uh zack and Daniel fighting seem like ooh so it's chapter 1 or 2 in the novel he will get his new overpowered body should I help

it will give me some points if I tried to be friends with yes I'll help him

Everyone pov

Fuck why are they not helping him

Unknown person: Take video with you phone hey stop it man

Zack: if I not what are you going to do

Me: just top it

Author pov

He tried to punch me I was able to easily dodge his attack probably I'm stronger than him

ME: stop I do not want to hurt you man

Zack: you hurt me I'll kill you dumb ass

Me:well time to put samdak teaching on practice

How to beat a boxer

well first thing to do I remember from the video is

let's get rid of his leg a boxer greatest strength calf kick I do not need those techniques because my body is moving on his own

Zack: aha fuck my leg it hurt man

Me: uhh why are they're a red spot in his body

Zack: The fuck are you talking about man

Let's finish this he trow a punch

Me : yep it's easy to dodge this man

seem like the red dots on his body are weak point for example his groinn oof, head, armpit, and his head and a lot of weak point in a human body

so why didn't it work when I was looking at my body well I already know because my body is perfect so will be Daniel park new body what about people like Vin Jin, gun park, and other famous characters

hahaha let's end this with his armpit man cause I remembered that iI you hit somewhere on armpit you'll be able to make his harm paralyzed for a short time of period let's end this man

Zack: huh why cars I move my hands the fuck did you do it doesn't matter I still got one end

Me : ahah it really doesn't matter can just do the same things again lets end him take your boyfriend with you

Me: hey man are you OK

Daniel: I'm alright thank you

Me: you should work today 100 push up, 100 sit up, 100 squats, 10 thousand kilometers every single day to lose weight and do notneat those unhealthy things man you'll lose weight man

In my head: copying one punch man is wild I'm giving him advice that I couldn't even do in past body even tough I was a martial art genius

Daniel: I can't I'm pathetic man

Me: everyone has a purpose in life and beside I sense that you have a shit load of potential if you just applied yourself you could be be more powerful

Daniel: thank you bye

Me; well I need money man I wondered if there is stocks in this world I e read lookism to chapter 400 something

so to make money gotta become a thug or be friend with gun park and other famous person well times to go man and hit the library


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