/ Fantasy / Primordial Soul's Rebirth
摘要
Author Note: This story is only for those who like reading about overpowered protagonists, as our MC is going to be more than just overpowered.
He is going to thrash anyone who comes in his way while enjoying his life.
Also, it's a world travel novel, for those who have an interest in world travel.
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The story is about a person who has lived through many lives, seen incredible things, and become one of the strongest, if not the strongest beings around. Although he struggles to remember his past, he is determined to grow even stronger by utilizing his personal system, as that would bring back his memories. He has one main mission: to enjoy life to the fullest, and he is absolutely committed to achieving it.
Follow through the journey as he becomes the strongest (again?) and regains his memory while also enjoying his life along with his system and some other people.
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Discord server for those who are interested: - https://discord.gg/cxaGXfphAy
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Power stones and golden tickets are much appreciated, so if you could, then please donate them to this book.
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The story starts off with lots of mysteries to be unveiled which keep me hook from the very first chapter. The character and world background are interesting ( I love handsome OP MC ) [img=Mad]. The author did a good job on narrating the story and wrote it nicely. If you like a story about op mc with lot’s of mysteries and secrets, this novel is what you are looking for! Thank you, author! Please keep updating! [img=update]
A very nice start to the novel. Although there aren’t enough chapters to do a full analysis it is definitely looking promising
Novel isn’t bad, but it’s a tad bit underwhelming. Kind of expected more when reading the author’s note in the synopsis. While the MC is indeed stronger than everyone in his world by a large margin, the situations surrounding him are quite frankly annoying. Not to mention the fact they’re left to stew for far too long and aren’t taken care of for no logical reason. That leads me to the novel’s progression, it’s entirely too slow, or rather inconsistent. Oftentimes an event that can be explained in a single chapter, is extended by several. I get the need to give readers a better idea of what they’re reading, but that’s no reason to spoon feed us everything like we’re slow of comprehension. There’s also the flip-flopping of past/present and flashbacks anidst events. Unnecessarily prolongs things and disrupts the flow of reading. Moving on, the MC, his interactions with others, the romance. I actually like the MC’s personality for the most part as he isn’t a pushover and is cruel to a satisfying degree. If anyone crosses him, he’ll give them hell(for the most part). He’s smart, snarky and just overall an enjoyable character to read about. My problem with him though in this regard stems from the romance. Honestly, when the story began I felt things were moving a bit too fast as within 10 chapters he was already moving in on two women. But after several dozen chapters, no further progress is made. It’s not until recent chapters that he has finally made a move after their feelings have long been made clear and a substantial amount of time passing. It was long overdue and at that point I felt no satisfaction from it finally happening. Anyhow, while I had several criticisms, I’d still recommend giving this a chance as it has its merits and I can see myself continuing to read this on occasion.
First of all...CONGRATULATIONS for getting contracted !!! 👍 As for the story...to say the least it is very interesting and has a bit of mystery as well. Although the story is somewhat slow-paced but since it also contain slice of life, I can go with it. The mc is overpowered and also since he's on a journey to rediscover himself and experience the world, I hope to read more interesting things and see how the plot goes.
It's good . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Krinox told me to read it.... He is a bastard
This seems interesting so far! I gave a reasonable rating, and the writing has so much space to improve. Thank you author for making this, keep up the good work ☺
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you still reading this 8. You saw that mistakes, right? 10. But did you see that I skipped 6 ? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I Also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time but if you were entertained leave a like and happy reading 17. This is by no means , copied. It's original. 18. I skipped 17 too.
Here is your review!! the story is much better than expected, the relationship past is fast but can roll with it. ........................................................................................................................
Deleted my negative review because this is some good stuff. A really great power fantasy! with op mc.
I love this book up till now and hope it keeps going like this. Hope you get the best author
Only read 4 chapters so far but I just had to review it. This is gas. I have very high hopes. It seems to have everything I want in a novel. Thank you for writing this author! Please keep writing so I will be able to read for awhile!
Probably the greatest novel in the history of webnovel ...you should read it because it is I who ordered—I who never was found.
I am really enjoying the story!!! To the point that I added it to my library. Please be encouraged!!! Do not doubt your writing skills. The only issue is some minor grammar errors.
Author here!! Just putting a review with 5 stars as it's my own novel. I won't say much about the book since it's my book but I will tell you this that MC will be overpowered in every aspect, so, if you want to read a book with an overpowered MC, try it. Anything other than this is for you to discover. I a request though: Pease donate powerstones as it works as an energy drink for us writers. That's all.