/ Realistic / Prima Causa
摘要
Welcome to your judgement.
I am officer Bleak of the Soul judgement bureau.
It is my job to determine the value of your soul.
So what is your story?
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Interesting premise, kind of reminded me of the anime Death Parade. We'll never know what happened to that good looking European guy 🤷♀️ Could use a revision because there are typos and missing punctuation marks. Could also use more chapters. Hehehe, I lurk and I lurk. No arm puns here to take my time!
I wanna meet him, can I be his nth case? The author did a good job, it also made me think with him because I am a person that questions good and evil. A True Neutral, it was shown in the protagonist's character perfectly. However, I somehow feel like he was lifeless or monotone, but that was probably a trait of being neutral that was always thinking in the inside. The trait that I probably shared with him, like we can't judge and react normally, always delving deeper into the situation. It was just rightfully realistic to me. Author-san did a good job :)