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Our MC is reincarnated into the Marvel Universe with a select group of abilities and a golden finger. He'll travel the multiverse getting rebirth after every lifetime and go to a new world, exploring the multiverse in all its glory
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Uh! The idea is great but get in touch with the SHIELD ruin everything. Remember that SHIELD and Hydra are one. So giving Mutra mutants to experiment with is a very bad idea. He could have saved them and helped them on his own, he has money, he didn't need SHIELDRA. I hope this fic has a sequel.
reminds me of the dc fanfic 'HUNGER' in the apex predator feel honestly haven't read through it all, but has mad potential I hope that you don't drop the lack of ****ups in grammar for the most part is enough to make this good your writing skills are nice
fast phase. mc get wishes of his favorite characters. if you like logic you will not like it. time jumps. overall can read if you are looking for logical and brilliant mc who knows the cause and effect then you may find this work not likeable
This is a great story so far keep up the good work but dont forget your other one either
you are finally back and at least you didn't drop so you kept your word . . . . . .