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Dreams sometimes come true; for Keven, it was more than he asked for. Two worlds at war, secrets he can't understand, and the world's weight in his choices. He has to make choices that he wishes someone else would make, but it's not entirely bad because his heart is allowed to make a new decision. With all this freedom will he make the right choice?
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I pretty cool book to put ur time into... Am not usually into this kinds of books but who's counting no one so I love it and I hope you could too
The black book cover captivated me.. I just love black 🖤..It signifies elegance.. I would definitely like to find out what's in the book for me yunno...so ..ready to dive in..Added to Faves!!
Keven, a simple farmer’s son, has one dream: to become a sword wielder, a position of immense power, wealth, and fame that could lift his family and village out of poverty. In this captivating fantasy, Keven’s journey begins when he’s chosen to pursue his dream, and as the story unfolds, we are introduced to a host of colorful characters, thrilling challenges, and dark secrets. The author does a fantastic job bringing Keven’s world to life with rich descriptions and a plot that keeps you hooked from the start. The characters are well-developed, and the relationships Keven forms, both friendships and rivalries, add depth to the narrative. There’s a perfect balance of magic, danger, and mystery that keeps the story exciting. The grammar and writing style are excellent, making the story easy to follow without losing its complexity. It’s clear the author has put a lot of care into crafting this tale, and with the story still ongoing, I can’t wait to see where Keven’s journey takes him next. Highly recommended for fans of epic fantasy and coming-of-age stories!
The story at first felt like it will go slow, but I actually found it not so after the first chapter. Thinking about all the other books I've read, it usually takes at least one chapter to start getting going. If you think about books who start hitting it off the first paragraph, they usually burn out quickly. I don't feel like this will. Very happen with how's it's turning out. I've read Anthony's other books from the past and he has become a better writer. God Bless you for your gift Anthony.
Very interesting story, I thought the synopsis/blurb could've been crafted better. The story overall was very good, I haven't read a lot of sword wielder stories so when I read this it was really interesting and to the point. Although the pace was a little fast, I think for someone reading webnovel it will catch their attention quickly. The paragraphs are not spaced well enough in my opinion, some are too long and they strained my eyes. Perhaps you can look into that in future chapters. Speaking of which, the paywall was a little too quick. I wouldn't recommend paywalling it that much unless you plan to write less than a hundred chapters. The writing was good, but sometimes the narrative slipped, like switching from the third-person perspective to the writer's/narrator's. There were no grammar or punctuation mistakes so far, but the use of passive voice was overrated, it got annoying to keep reading them. Perhaps balance them, but otherwise. I can't comment on the worldbuilding yet, but so far, so good. Avoid the info-dumping though, it won't help with a smooth narrative. The characters, Keven and Greg maybe, they sound and feel 2d, not real human. But maybe that was the author's intention to develop them further. the updates seem to be frequent and the development of the story is good enough, so I would say this deserves a 4/5 stars. Kudos to the author and happy reading!