/ Video Games / Pokemon: These Players are too annoying!
摘要
Players, those with questionable judgment and difficult to manage, tend to act very randomly.
The Pokémon world, while beautiful, hides unpredictable dangers within.
If players enter the Pokémon world, what impact will they have on it?
Red didn't know, but he was certain he would put them in their place if they dared to challenge him.
*I make this novel for fun
*MC is a good guy
*Not my art, if you are the artist who draw this, you can told me to put this image down
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7評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
The idea is fire. The main thing is that the author does not abandon everything and continues to develop the world and heroes. It will be quite difficult when the number of players increases. I wish Red would learn how to use his admin system.
Pretty good story so far, it has potential. I would like you to show the growth of the players mentally; maybe create some arcs where they all do their own thing? Also, I suggest brushing up the title to get more views
I love the idea and yet for such a simple idea the writer dose it so well And I honestly didn’t think they’d show what was happening with the players in the real world And they did
It's good. I love the funny bits. Updates are pretty stable. Gets a bit crazy at times *ahem* Mt. Moon *ahem*. I loved the Mt. Moon arc, it was the funniest thing I've read in a while. Liked the story. Would recommend giving a read definitely. Other than that, it's your choice.
I mean, it is enjoyable, and there are certain parts with the players that I actually enjoy, but the problem is that this feels too centered around them, the synopsis literally says that this is Red dealing with the players, yet we have seen more the players than Red (by the 34 chapter) the writing quality is good. But 1st, too many players is only worsening the situation, you can't deal with that many characters, not even professional writers write that many that have any importance, and 2nd, reading the players, most of the time, feels boring to me, I'm liking the story and want to give it a try, I'm only less than halfway through after all, but there are many things that could be improved.
One of the most Underrated stories on this platform. Although Red could use some more screen time.
A very unique idea and well written for the most part but those summoned players are just out right annoying, it's hard for me to enjoy the book like this.. 😭
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