/ Video Games / Pokemon: These Players are too annoying!
摘要
Players, those with questionable judgment and difficult to manage, tend to act very randomly.
The Pokémon world, while beautiful, hides unpredictable dangers within.
If players enter the Pokémon world, what impact will they have on it?
Red didn't know, but he was certain he would put them in their place if they dared to challenge him.
*I make this novel for fun
*MC is a good guy
*Not my art, if you are the artist who draw this, you can told me to put this image down
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Pretty good story so far, it has potential. I would like you to show the growth of the players mentally; maybe create some arcs where they all do their own thing? Also, I suggest brushing up the title to get more views
A very unique idea and well written for the most part but those summoned players are just out right annoying, it's hard for me to enjoy the book like this.. 😭
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