/ Anime & Comics / Pokemon: The forsaken world
摘要
In the world of Pokémon
A boy named Grey woke up on the world of Pokémon but it was nothing like what remembered
A world where there is cut throat competition and
a crazy group of fanatics follow the mc on the journey beyond
P.S
no potential
no pokefillia
no Harem
no BS
this world will not be based on any region for now but it will eventually reach there
the plot will be mine and if anyone has ideas or queries regarding Pokémon abilities they can ask
my own knowledge is very little and all of it comes from half forgotten anime and some Pokémon games
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I don't really understand the world background yet but I think I will understand in the future, this may be still short but I think it has the potential to be a good fanfiction, don't let me down author
my only real problem with this story is that please use any grammar application. My eyes hurt after reading the first chapter.
So far it’s too early to judge on how good the story is overall but it looks like it has potential so I will rate it and then again after a lot of chapters pass.
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So far it is too early to judge but still the story concept is good and a new region The blend of new mechanics introduced in new games