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Surprisingly, Ash has a big brother.
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Interesting start with different pokemon than what most fanfics would use. The pokemon increase in strength fast but that is probably not the focus of the fanfic( I am not sure), the route looks like the op hidden type which I haven't seen in pokemon fanfics before. So I am really excited for this and hope the author is of the same mind too and doesn't drop.
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THE COVER PHOTO WAS AN EEVEE BUT HIS EEVEE EGG DIDN'T EVEN HATCH LOL AHAHAHAHAHAHA
This project is interesting to me. Minuses of the project : 1)broken power limit 2)very little plot 3)few characters, and the existing ones are little revealed 4) the main character defeated strong pokemon before the tournament, but lost to weak ones in the tournament
i hadnt checked out this novel for quite awhile now and first this i see as a ch title is "he lost..." i read it and now im not interest in reading this anymore as while it was interesting and a fun read but that ch killed it for me like im not interested in reading what more or less transformed into a more op ash ketchum and just repeating the anime more or less (if you dont get the reference then just watch the end of any season of pokemon to get it) in fact i more or less hate how this ended more then the anime due to how this went like really? if the kanto arc is anything to go by it just spells that its gonna end up the same even in future arc's
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Story has a lot of potential. The grammar is good.Can't wait for the next chapter release. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story has potential but it is ruined by the lack of explanation of the events which transpire in the story. One can still guess the reason for some situation but it makes it even harder to read due to the bad grammar of some paragraphs which will leave you trying to figure out what is happening and how did things end up in its current situation.
the story is good, and The way the mc trains his pokemon's are pretty realistic. overall, 5/5 Recommended such a shame the author dropped it tho.
The title and description caugh my attention and overall after reading this book can say that got quite intrigued and interested by this book more so as how OC got his pokemon to be strong and everything look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on would love to read more of this book not to mention the island where OC has his pokemon definitely liked it cant wait to read more
Loved how u did this book with the OC being from another world in which now he is altering many things that are going on in the Pokemon World like with what happened to Zapdos being captured then of course what happened with the three legendary dogs appearing and Ho Oh being injured as well a Hoopa being responsible for many people disappearing either way the title and description caught my attention along with how OC isnt from the Pokemon World but from somewhere else and way how he trains his pokemon and even how Gary and Ash act polite and kind especially when around the OC overall love everything of this book truly sad and disappointed that u decided to discontinue this book it is most definitely different from other books as well is quite interesting and intriguing do look forward to hopefully reading more Pokemon books from u
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a very funny novel and it's development is very good catching legendaries like candy hehheehheheh I don't have any thing more to say so.....
Me encanta pero porque parece ke entrena poco ahora además porque siempre en Pokémon asen tanto énfasis en las organizaciones criminales me gusta como lo hiciste al principio con starmie
Es muy buena por qué el personaje no se anda de chingado con chorradas tipo Ash aunque me gustaría ver a starmie volviéndose un dios poderosisimo
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story has a lot of promise looking forward to what pokemon he will add to his team. Please don't make him follow ash the story is great as it is. .....................