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摘要
A young man wakes up on an island with no memories of himself or his loved ones. All he has are memories not related to his personal life and a message introducing him to his new life.
A few notes before you read this Fanfic.
It's not going to be a rushed story. It's going to take time and go through things slowly.
One Piece world only, no world traveling.
While the Main Character will be strong, he will not be OP for quite a while. Be prepared to wait for it.
The story will be following Luffy and the others for a while. This is for two reasons, one it helps me write and two, the Main Character actually has a valid motivation for doing so.
No harem.
Yes, the System is loosely based on 'The Gamer' but isn't a direct copy and is modified to suit my needs for my story. So while it might seem similar it is NOT the same.
I do not own One Piece or any of the characters. All rights belong to their respective owners. I only own the Original Character.
Prerelease Chapters here: patreon.com/playingnovels
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it's just a carbon copy of one piece, nothing more nothing less, a one piece from a different perspective. I thought that after skypea he would go the **** away from the crew and start a real story but welp now he will remain with them till the 2 years separation of the crew then with the excuse of beginning equal from what I understood he will keep being with them... basically a one piece less interesting and from another perspective
Read till chapter 28, Tried reading as much as could, but I can read no more, there isn't even a proper story Developent so far, its just the orignal One Piece + an add on Mc, No Original story no plot, no proper additions no nothing. Really hoped to give this one a better rating, but after reading so far I feel its just better to read the original one once again, its not like there is much difference to begin with.
Nice story with excellent service. I like having smart, cunning Mc. Long chapters.👍 I hope you will continue to write more chapters..👌👏
A good with a solid story and character building FanFic Don't give up on this one Thank you author-san, this kind and type of story make me nostalgic of good old novel fic(Bleached Multiverse, A Knight Will, Heroic Myth, Highschool Of Heroes, In Different World With Naruto System', etc...) # NoOffenceAuthor-san
From what I've seen in the reviews this novel is pretty good. Oh damn...I never knew you needed at least 140 characters to make a review. Anyways keep up the good work man. Im looking forward to how this is going
3/3/2/2/2: 2.4 Writing: 3, the quality is average at best, the author is basically rewriting One Piece with his OG-MC's POV, with a couple of chapters, in the beginning, setting the tone and basic info. There are some consistent error that has not been fixed, like belly-> Beli for the currency, Updates: 3, constant, albeit every 2-4 days release of a new chapter. Story Dev: 2, going to give it a 2 because, if you subtract what is already canon for One Piece, you get no real deviation from canon, besides the OG-MC's thoughts, actions, and it's basically reading One Piece in another POV. Char Design, 2, a mix of The Gamer vibes, with a system and questline, but only 'expand' on OG-MC, although it is in the infancy, I can only recall OG-MC trying to train/explain to the other chars about some technique that would be useful in the future. World Background: 2, What world background? Sure, you got normal One Piece lore and info, but that's about it, think you, reading and finishing One Piece, and explaining the plot back to one who has not read it. And someone else is listening to what you are explaining but has the about the same level of understanding of the plot. Final Thoughts: I can see this novel as being slow, (both update speed, and novel development, but I don't judge negatively to a slowly releasing novel) but take the time to either make this cannon part interesting, and not a reread of cannon in a different POV, or skip the beginnings of One Piece, to perhaps right before White Beard arc, or after the 2yrs as clearly OG-MC is letting what is cannon playout with no real original content/changes to the story. It is a decently-written novel to read, if you want a refresh of the plot of One Piece, told by an Extra-Character point-of-view, but currently, not my cup of tea,
never give up please don't stop like others your special and the story development are insane keep going men❤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 can't wait for others chapters
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Look, I am also an author and I know how long it takes to write a chapter, and each chapter here is relatively long so way to go author. But, there is a problem with this story. It’s not terribly written, it’s just that it is basically narrating the entire one piece anime, it feels like I am literally watching the anime in this fanfic, and that’s a bad thing. Author, we don’t want to read what we already know. Don’t be afraid to take risks, change the plot line, don’t make the MC a mere spectator. The MC is just a side character that travels with the straw hat crew but barely does anything, even though he has future knowledge about the plot line. Now he does change the plot line a little bit, like when he stole a devil fruit from Enel, or when he destroyed a buster call. But that’s basically about it. He also does nerf the MC even when he has a system and an OP devil fruit. I believe that this author has the talent to make an incredible story, but it’s being wasted. And even though he did say that the MC will become independent, it’s just taking too long and I don’t see why he just doesn’t leave the straw-hats and become independent already. Most of the readers, including me, are just bored because it’s an exact copy of the anime. And most of us are losing interest in the story including me.
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The boring truth, it is only One Piece only with one more secondary character, there are no changes so far apart from some people that the MC defeats, if you want to see a summary of one piece with a secondary character just read it, the truth expected more but I suppose which was to be expected there are no One piece stories where the MC doesn't follow the canon at least he's better than the disgusting fanfic where the Mc told him he came from another world and the author self-bosses the MC. So if you like one piece you will surely read it even if it is boring to read what you already saw, if you come for an original fanfic where there is nothing about the conon then go here it is all canonical and there is not much change, have a good morning
Mc is very fanboy one piece Has no personality He likes to take orders............... ................................................................................................................................
Don't waste your time kids, this is just a rip-off story to the One Piece, nothing change, his just too passive to care. He always gives reasoned, but the reasoning doesn't add-up towards his first objective, so why still write!? This story is so boring that you always knew what going to happen, it's just carbon ****. Waste, the Author knew how to write but not to make a great story.
Starts off good but then starts to go downhill and once they get to sabody it becomes absolute dogsh*t lol the MC is a joke and just a beta dumba**, too many things are just being forced and just all together it is a HUGE waste of time And just a garbage fanfic
well if you like a story of a side character this story is for you 👍🎉 all the mc did is for the sake of the crew like a babysitter.. its good for wasting your time if you don't have anything to do.. its just like reading original one piece on side characters point of view .
We are almost 50 chapters into the story and I can summarize it as One Piece canon, with an OP MC whose only real impact in the story so far has been start teaching Observation Haki to the crew (but no one has it yet), who has stolen Enel Fruit and made Luffy bounty lower due to beating Crocodile. The MC has a gamer power that lets him do simulation battles so as to grind experience and skills, making any possible kind of conflict meaningless (unless he faces an Admiral/ Yonko/, there is no enemy right now who could oppose him). The MC has been an almost completely passive character in the story, which could make sense in his objective of obtaining Enel's fruit. But even after that, he still sticks with the group and canon afterwards. The fact that he is participating in Foxy's fight and kept it canon (not fighting on the first round, and obtaining a possible crew member for his supposedly new crew) showcases a lack of originality of the author, and a missing opportunity to derail canon in anyway.
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A combination of 'The Gamer' and 'One Piece' it what allows this enjoyable and cinematic-like novel to shine. It follows the path of the Straw Hats, yet places a greater emphasis on his more individual actions. This Author in my opinion, is finally doing something right compared to others 'One Piece' Authors in that he is going for 'Enel's' Devilfruit. FINALLY!! This is a really good novel, and I recommend everyone to give this a read.
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Pleasd dont drop this story if you need funding i will pay for this story too keep going You may ask why but its because ITS NO HAREM FINALLY A AUTHOR THAT DOESNT CARE ABQOUT BIG OVERLY HUGE TITIES AND DISPORPORTIONATE BODY WOMEN
This story is so trashy the mc is so passive just to keep the plot going this story is just a carbon copy of one piece in point of view of the mc dont be fooled by ranking of this book this just plain copy right